Why was this dropped? Fvk
Had to visit this one while reminiscing. My second or third novel I think? Crazy how this is one of my favourite novels ever despite me being a harem hater
You are completely, absolutely in the wrong sir. Criticism is normal especially in entertainment industry. If no one is criticizing story, then how would author improve himself. You must have know how these webnovel author earn money, right? Simply, the more words they write, the more they earn. So to generate their income, less creative authors nowadays write forced plots, write internal monologue for 1 chapters(which does not contribute to story at all), face slapping scenarios which last for 50 chapters, and repeat these again and again. Some people may take a liking to story in the beginning, but when you read over 1000 chapters and these storylines repeats countless times, it may be a little bit annoying for them to read. So, to say "story is fucking bullshit" is indeed true. Writing story is author's job, if a person isn't good at their job then it right to criticize them. Even top authors like Patrick, Brandon Sanderson, GRRM had their work criticized. So what does these little webnovels authors amount to?You sir, should change you mindset, or you will always be a retard!
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Despite the fact that other dark type creatures are calling the MC "Lord", "King", and "Your Majesty", the female Lord of the MC, whose described as "smart", seemed to be dumbed down and constantly underestimate the MC's power. It's funny at first, but then it just became redundant and finally starts to piss you off when the female Lord's intelligence would always be nerfed when it came to discovering the MC's identity.
Currently chapt 32. This would've been a nice read if he doesn't praise the country too much... Once is fine, but doing it in almost every chapter is just too much. Hoping that it stops chapters until later
I'm kinda exhausted reading this books to much info and too much online bickering like heyyy.....It's a waste of breath and time to mull over it. Also, too much cursing will cause so much disturbance to the reader. I hope the writer to read my comment. I really like this book even though fu Zhi meets a lot of trouble everywhere she goes I can understand that since she is the protagonist. She needs a lot of screen time hahha
Aside from the very unique and unexpected way he dies which i think is a lil ingenious but still somewhat forced. Wellll the story development and story itself errrrr :(
Obviously I have to give myself 5 stars.
To anyone reading this, thank you! I'm primarily writing because I want to, but sometimes that motivation runs out and randomly comes back. So if sometimes I randomly disappear for a few weeks... You know why.
Also, I don't mind reviews if they're harsh and give me feedback/pointers, any are accepted!
Side Note: This is the first novel I've ever written so it will be a rough ride, if you do end up sticking with me, thank you.
The story is very interesting. Early on everything is black-and-white clear-cut but as the story progresses things get Blurred and it’s cool too see how the MC Interacts with the Characters
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you.
I can't even write a word of this novel
Nevermind I already wrote the 'WORD'
very good