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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
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So... like, the story basically fails it's starting premise. Ht idea of drawing upon different selves is a cool one, but that basically only happens once, with a single other self.
After that, all his abilities come from doing the megaman, and they just feel... flavorless. Like, It could be spells, or chi, or psychic powers, or whatever... it wouldn't make a difference, because the powers don't feel like anything. They don't have any character.
He could have a generic system, and it wouldn't make a bit of difference.
World build is... something? The world doesn't actually make a lot of sense, it basically exists enough to make the main character look cool. The mist monsters occasionally talk about being chosen to replace man, but that element hasn't gone anywhere and has no payout.
In the end, there was the beginning of an interesting idea here, but nothing was done with it, and it's left the story now really feeling like anything in particular.
Great Novel, currently at chapter 20 so I won’t make a full review yet.
Read if you prefer MCs who pulls the strings over battle maniac MCs.
Is this suppose to be like Black Tech Internet Cafe System? Sound almost the same, reborn in a new world inside a local person body, start a store or business and release VR games.
great plot and captivating story . page turner
A premissa e incrivel, o desenvolvimento e viciante, so falta a estabilidade das postagem de capitulos. ??????????????????????????????????????????????????
Whats the MC like? Is he cold, indifferent, evil or is he lame, boring and a simp? If its not the first half I’m out
Real Score: 2/5 (Webnovel you need to fix your scoring system!)Title: "Standard(not), But A Nice Read."It starts off standard as an isekai into a shoujo romance dating sim prequel like "my next life as a villainess" but with more tradgety. Then it goes off that to some kind of power fantasy where they can make and do just about anything. Then the power fantasy is pulled in by the plot of the isekai worlds story. And it just goes back and forth until the story trips out at the end.In conclusion, it's ok.
Authorrrrr! pls continue this book????. Its one of my favorite books. If you don't this little bookworm might die of update deprivation. I promise I will send a big castle or something when I start earning. please author????
All I can say this is probably one of the most amazing transmigrated villain mc story I have ever read.......................................................................................................................................
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