The story is really good...
I like the mystery, how he made the character...
It is very intriguing, and makes you want to dwelve more into it..
Hope to read more from you Author sama!!!
The second I read your story's synopsis, I'm all like, "Hmm. Story about kings? As in royals? That should be interesting."
When I read the book, it's like the words are exploding everywhere or something! Call me dramatic, but i'm totally loving this book of yours. It has some freshness which is great as well. I'm still reading so,,,yeh, i'm gonna go and do that. I hope that you publish more chapters soon though.
Good luck!
I hope that you dont make the same mistake which a novel very similar to this,the epic of butterfly did by involving the family and kids too much into the story where mc gives them her benifits and they leech off mc everywhere.Make the mc explore the world and explore the system
Ok so I usually don't bother writing a review, but this one just annoyed me in the wrong way..First - synopsis only reflect the very first chapter, as from the second chapter it feels like it's a different book what so ever..Second - let's say we ignore synopsis and first chapter as a mistake, but even then the MC after transmigration can only think about having s**.. Third - following from second point there's no story development, there's a random time skip with unexplained cultivation increase (cultivation levels are a mystery) and forced events without any logic involved.I'm normally quite tolerant with the novels even if they're not my cup of tea, but even if it's the very first novel that the author wrote there's just too many inconsistencies. WebNovel SHOULDN'T allow the novels of such bad quality to reach trial reads..
As the other fans/readers said, it is an amazing book, i also love how the girl gave the boy another chance, even though she was hurt a lot of times, keep it up, author~
I love where the story is heading and where it is currently. I would hate for the story to stop updating, that is just how good this novel is. Keep up the good work Pls dont quit the book
I feel betrayed, the synopsis says that Allen was born with a disease that makes him unable to speak, he is basically mute and is an orphan because he lost his family early, when I read the synopsis I thought he was a homeless person very young, but when start reading the guy has claw scars on his throat and that gives the impression that it's not a birth disease that makes him mute, but that his voice box was ripped by the claws of some beast and the guy has already finished high school and is became a hunter for lack of choice since he couldn't find a job, the synopsis is more interesting than the beginning of the story when I started reading '-'
Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
From the little that i have read, my impressions are that this is a rushed, non-sensical, confusing, lazy, etc story.Not for me.
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tell m another name for novel I can't find In google.......
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Story is causing me to lose brain cells.
So he wants to show his AI to the world insgead he shows design drawings. is he showing them the coding? I don’t he is as that would be dumb and would take hours for the worlds best programer just to skim through the general outline of the program.
World background 1 star as has magor lopholes.
Story developments, 1 star as MC shows up in conference empty handed with just plans for some theoritical AI design (he doesnt even have an actual AI) and everyone is acting all shocked and awed by his pie in the sky.