An embarrassing school slice-of-life power fantasy. Emotional age of whoever wrote this is around 12. It actually started out okay, but later it regressed more and more. Oh and of course MC always "smiles
"No, no, Mr Joowon, you wouldn't understand the heart of an older-sister-fan. I am spending on my babies. They need to eat well too."
I love your novel so far, but the system characters are turning me away. I wa just introduced to Sarah and it seems like she has limited influence on the people with her harem system (including the mc and her harem). Are system users now just characters that are op and can influence the mc group or will they eventually be able to stop them from influencing. I really want to continue but would rather drop it now if that’s the case.
If you hate yourself just a little bit, this book is absolutely perfect for you. It’s a very niche concept but the author has executed it brilliantly.While the “mc” is disgustingly pitiful, his system actually has a good personality (and not in the weird sentient system that feels forced and is a tsundere type of way). Also, his interactions with the side characters are genuinely entertaining (except when he starts feeling proud, then I wanna die just a little bit?)Another thing to note is that mc perfectly exemplifies the deadly sins and why they’re so disdained, makes for a really well-written character even if they’re written to be hated. All in all, really fun read and I’m looking forward to seeing what the author cooks up.
the writing quality and pacing is good, characters description is very good I rate this book 8/10
Love it. It waa short so Im a little bit hungry for morwe. keep it coming. Its actually kind of new and I just love it. Pleaae keep the release coming cause i want more pleaae please plwase
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Writing Quality: Your writings understandable and readable with punctuation and grammar (better than 80%-90% of novels) and there's little to no spelling errors I've seen for now.Stability: Can't rate it well because there are only 3 chapters but it's looking good so imma give it the benefit of the doubtDevelopment: You've shown what the MC is capable of early on and shown what his eyes and wishes can do and the benefits they grant in 2 chapters which many fail to do with 10.Characters: Your keeping to the strength based world like the soul refinement guy looking down upon those weaker then him and his enemies giving up cause it's hopelessWorld background: Story is holding up and looks like your adding kingdom aspects into this (which is my sweet tooth) along with the steady development of the world instead of jumping 20 chapters every 3 lines
What a nice story! I cannot wait for the author to update the novel.????????????????????????????????????
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Cultivation novel with a panda MC. I will not say much, just than I like it and the fact that not a 'I will kill everyone and be OP after 20 chapter.
why did you change the story I liked the slime one???......................................................................... ...........