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It begins as it is told in the synopsis, the MC is an average normal type half psychopath and the heroin? She is involved in the whole mess because she is curious and thus they are related until a rare romance is created, like the stockholm syndrome, if you continue reading the novel you will understand what I say, I thought it was going to develop differently when I read the synopsis, but as far as I've read I think it's fine, it's not one of the best novels I've read but it's good and leaves me with intrigue since I don't have the fast pass
Similar to ‘The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World’. Same thing with sign in novels, where they stuff you full with novel of the same genre.
Well everyone, if you see one you had seen all..This is one of those "I can see hints" series. Where instead of hints, it actually answer mate. Hint and answer is different. But I wouldn't judge, you can call it whatever you like..We had read about ocean.. Tunnels... And now, island..
You, reader, must look at my story and think: "Hmm, this looks just like a bazillion of other stories where MC reincarnates into some monster with a system and/or a cheat". And what will I say to you in reply?Yes, on the surface, it is. But! It is my duty as a writer to avoid, at least conciously, all cliches that I could. To play with tropes, think up original ideas and so on and so on.Or maybe you don't care for originality too much. Many don't. Well, one way or another, I hope you will give it a try >:3
ooh the cover is of The king of the heroes the demi god Gilgamesh . Nice choice , nice choice indeed . The story is pretty good , the character description
TLDR: MC is a doormat
Review:
MC gains a system that requires him to bring in students to teach cultivation.
He gains strength through the act of guiding students, etc.
But, he's a huge doormat, everyone walks all over him
Despite being an authoritative figure (Sect Master) he calls each disciple Sir/Madam. He lets them demand things from him like some middle age women asking for the manager.
He's a doormat through and through.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Watch them picked this thing over everything else.............................................................................................
Wooooooo!!! Cultivation story anytime! As for harem…… nil sighted at the moment!!
This is the best gamer story I have read in hundreds of stories I have read at this site. Your gamer story looks more realistic than the other's, especially the stat increase point.
It's really a great book. It's neither slow nor fast paced. Just perfect! Please, keep up the good writing, author! Your story is super addictive!!!
Hello there.
As the author, I'm obliged to give a review halfway through. This review is coming late since I already passed the halfway mark of my novel.
Now, Now. lemme get to the actual review.
As the author, I wrote while viewing my story as having no flaws, but I do admit my novel does have some flaws that can only be seen from the reader's side. So, it is prolly up to you to decide what those flaws are.
My good points(this is something that can be verified by other readers)
1. First and foremost, I'm deeply proud of my world-building. It is certainly on another level(okay, maybe this is self-love). My lores are something that I can confidently brag about. Moreover, I make sure to minimize my lore-drops since I can barely retain many lores in my mind without checking back on my gdoc. This style of lore-dropping was something I developed over many chapters
2. My characters. While it may be argued that I have a small cast of characters, each of them is impactful to the story. They have motivations that drive their side of the story and not all of them have a happy ending.
- Volume 1 featured only about a handful of characters. Of course, there were a lot of minor characters
- Volume 2 expanded my list of characters marginally
- Volume 3 involves my MC venturing into the human world so it is expected that I would have a lot of characters
3. Story Development: I took inspiration from many novels and implemented my take on non-human stories. If I were to give an accurate synopsis, it would simply be, 'The story about Reve's journey and the larger world'.
I tend to stay away from regular troupes but that's because I'm viewing things from a logical side. Not all my characters fight. Not all opponents can be considered villains. Not everyone is evil and good.
Also, the story is progressive. I think, too progressive. Each consecutive volume builds on the final plot.
Stability of Update: I can boast of updating 2 chaps per day throughout the month of February.
Writing Quality: my writing quality is better than average. Some chapters are superb and while some are just normal. This reflects on my mood when writing since I write better when I'm not rushed to finished the chapter.
After everything, it is safe to say that the Arcadia System is a must read for those that love fantasy.
