The pace of the story is super super slow. The story will be nice in the beginning(upto something like chapter 270) but gets disgusting as it goes on. The the MC also turns into one of those lucky b@stard only found in trash novels. This less than clever MC gets into very very sh*tty situations due to lack of cleverness , proper planning and carefullness but still comes out safe and sound because he is the "lucky b@stard".MC has a lot of plot armour(no more matter what crap he does he will remain the superb). I read upto 600 charpters in the raw and the MC is still not an official wizard. If you want to read this novel because you are a fan of "warlock of the magus world","age of adepts" or other magic novels with a clever MC, i suggest you stop reading this. Only those like a lucky MC who has everthing falling from the sky for him and with a lot of illogical plot armour will like this novel
I think i could absolutely enjoy your story but the grammar is really bad. I am sorry that i am saying it this direct, but maybe you have a friend or someone you know who can help. Otherwise try to find someone online who would help you and continue writing!
I haven’t read it yet, but I am currently working on Evo Prison and just finished binge reading Rise of the Hunters, BOTH of which are AMAZING reads. EVERYONE SUPPORT THIS AUTHOR AND COMMENT. COMMENTS ARE WORTH IT FOR THE AUTHOR, EVEN IF IT IS JUST A THANK YOU!
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Loved it! Really well developed and a fun read! Would recommend for anyone who wants an exciting sci fi novel to read. Thank you for posting it here!
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Nice story. Amazing teacher-disciple dynamic.I love the trope subversion and how the mc is completely different to most novels of similar genres.The story seems amazing and has a lot of potential.The MC's current love interest is also completey unique and never seen before. Their pure relationship cannot be compared with any other know examples.Keep it up King BiBiKAlso if you have time check out my novel RotA and leave a review. Thanks.
I'm really loving it so far. The characters are fun and lovable! This whole series balances humor and seriousness pretty well so far. Excited to see what happens in ch. 5. I don't really do reviews but this series just seems to ooze natural promise and potential! ?≧◉ᴥ◉≦
Damn this novel is goood! the scene between the modern world and the fantasy is balanced. The MC is likeable and not an asshole (he just wanted to sell fruits lol). To sum it up it has :> Good, likeable, funny, and MC> The scene between fantasy and modern world are balanced and not boring> The characters are likeable and somewhat realistic ( no young master/bussiness rival bullshit yet) > Fast paced plot so not boring> The MC has COMMON SENSE, that is the most important to mei hope this novel get picked
Amazing read. As expected from the writer of Library of Heaven's Path. The face slapping is awesome. The characters are very solid and there aren't any noticeable grammatical errors. I really like how main character is not so OP and how the story story is progressing. I want moooooore!!!!!