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i had to stop reading in the first chapter, English is to broken to make it an enjoyable read.

I have to admit,  your writing technique is my favorite.  it's so eloquent.

Great read!

Good story with lots of twist and turns. I enjoyed it and loved the ending

Very slow updates

Love this story

Hello there, this story contains of jumping scenes, so it has a different kind of taste; though despite of having its different style, rest assure that you'll not be confuse to the sequence.

Update is tomorrow night!

I love the storyline

great book
really enjoyed the story

excellently written, great characters & wonderful story!

Can't wait!
more updates please.