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This is seriously great. I like the way you manage to show Kye's sadness and anger, as well as how you introduce the universe. Everything is fluid and didn't disturb my reading time. Let's see what you will write later
It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them.
There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.
Interesting synopsis, i think this's good novel if there's no harem........................................................................................................................................
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled(Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
It’s face slapping novel. Seemingly designed to be painfully generic, it does encompasses all the worst parts of the genre. The MC is an insecure brat going on a powertrip, he has a system which gives him everything, and everyone is an autistic narcissist because that’s the only people our MC can “face slap”.If you enjoy the genre then it might tide you over, but it does nothing particularly well and the glacial pace only makes it more difficult to get through (30 shopping chapters in a row).
Great novel for getting right to the point.If you didn't read the prologues first and skipped to the main story (like me), you get thrust into the world very early.The system is very nice, and the game is also nice. I find this story unique because the MC is very talented from the start.I personally don't prefer MCs being so absurdly talented (in the real world), but I'd recommend you to give it a try Cheers
Its an enjoyable read.
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