One of the best Web Novels I have had the privilege of reading. I am hooked but thankfully the author has a very generous release schedule . Even though its the authors first web novel it reads really well and the quality keeps improving as the story progresses. I have high hopes that this novel will prove as a good example that English authors can also create top notch webnovels and one day be translated to Chinese :D
So far, as I have seen, this is the absolute most complete web novel that was released in english as an original. Kevin Ascending has a penchant for writing that allows the readers imagination to build the world for themselves. The primary focus, in my opinion, that catches my attention is the story arcs. Super action packed and easy to digest.
Dead already? No updates and we are going on a week since the last one. Pretty unfortunate if it doesn't even make it past 20 chapters.
It is also dumb that reviews have a character limit, not much else I can say about the story, BECAUSE IT'S ONLY AT TWENTY CHAPTERS!
I LOvE ThIS NOvEL ( A novel yandere?!? )
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I have currently read up to the latest chapter as of the time I am posting this, writing quality is very good and I haven’t found many mistakes so far, the updateing is pretty consistent, story development is good since there is already a goal to be achieved by the mc and others and although the idea of the in-game abilities becoming real is cliched and has already been done this one is somewhat unique from my knowledge and it will be both exciting and entertaining to see how the mc develops, the world background hasn’t been explained in great detail but there has been some information given about the world’s background and how it could develop so overall the world background is adequate and doesn’t affect the story’s quality, this book as a whole is quite good and I would recommend giving it a read and to preserve with it since the start is a little confusing/slow but it gets better as you go along
A system book why you level up as you battle obstacles.
Story development isn't forced and how it started really drew me in. This is actually my first system book and I'm enjoying it. I read all chapters and will be waiting for more.
I must add that the structure of the world background helps you to imagine it as you read.
Author did a great job and I will be waiting to read more.
most reasonable/readable novel from this batch, it's binge worthy
It's a very good novel to bing if you enjoy doing so , and for me personally I'm planning on stopping where I am because I feel that I'd get more enjoyment and less cliff-hangers with my strategy of wait till at least 10 chapters are there to bing.
the characters are goodly written plot is very good, I am all for it.
just don't drop the story it will make me angry and disappointed.
also why do you have the same story uploaded three times?
good luck
Poison tester here and heres'smy report for this one:
A shallow novel tbh, 5~6 chapters in and I still don't know the cultivation levels. It feels more of a wish fulfillment.
Not to mention this is one of the long dragging novels. Just to make the pos mc move out of the way it took 2~3 chapters.
Its a poison imo, so I don't recommend it.
Beginning of a good story. So please don't make virtual world in to a alien world or parallel world. Hope for the best . Again tnx for a nice story ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................And Please don't mashup with release date!!!!!!!
Probably one of the best novel, i read. I love the character as he kinda have relatable trait with me or even with other. While the system is good too, remind me of Raphael in Tensura (slime). But, talking about the writing style, this is surprisingly simple but caught all the detail i need. adding this into my collections, couldn't wait you update it, i just read 4 but i will do it more later. Good luck author!