An action and adventurous story with fighting and thrill. I am kind of loving it.So far it's nice Looking forward to more chapters. Keep the work??
A great story so far with an awareness of the tropes and interesting outlook. I am looking forward to seeing how the author develops the world and the MC’s lackeys!
I loved this novel back in the days, been reading it on gravity tales. I remember translations were on hiatus from time to time which made me sad. Qidian corpooligarchs you piece of *** you're late to the party. Out of all the good novels you pick something already translated or pure trash back to back in trial novels, probably on purpose.. I vote 1-star because there's no need to re-translate this novel. If anyone wants to read it check the site at novelupdates.
WTF this novel is too disgusting to me , what the hell is wrong with the author. Does he have a screw loose in his head . i can't bring myself to understand the hell is wrong with him . FUCK
Frankly pleasantly surprised.I have read dozens of xianxia and this one is by far in my top 3.It changes a lot compared to other just already by the fact that there are 2 mc. Following the history of the 2 sets is very interesting.Not much to say except go read the story.Author I see you haven't published a chapter for a while on this story... Do you want to abandon this story?
Hmmm...how should I start.....the plot is unique.....the writing quality improves as we go into the story.... let's see how the story progress...
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Hi Guys!Author here. If you guys enjoy the story please feel free to leave a review. More than anything, it helps motivate me to write more and more. Thank you for reading!
Chapter 7 : TRANSFORMATION ULQUIORRA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!No joke : blem with the orthographe please correct it soon***************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Great start. Very Funny. Hahaha. Who am I kidding? This is just one more comment so that I can get to 10 comments to get a rating. If you haven't realised yet, this is me, the guy who wrote the novel. Welp.
As per author request, here is my review. Overall the story progress nicely. The growth rate of MC on the slow side(strength wise), other growth such as earning and skills are in moderate range. In MC growth department, overall in an acceptable range. The only drawback is the release rate of the chapter is a bit too slow. It's to the point that I almost forget about the story plot. But I do understand if the author has some difficulty as we are all human and this is not a serious paying job for the author. Thanks for your sharing spirit. This is my review for now if you need more just let me know.
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was so exciting that it almost made me lose track of time. maybe there are many things that I understand a little, but that certainly doesn't stop me from reading. because one thing is certain in this story is.. where there's action, that's where the tension and twists of curiosity occur. keep up, authors ??