NothingHillYeS
author you are The best and you did a very great job.i really love this novel
I have noticed that your naming patter are of present day and time calendar of Christian. So I suggest you start a fresh calender system and naming of places and Can add present day naming as extra's like. 'Indraprast present day Hyderabad' or so and calendar like ' year 104 vijaynagar calender(1654) '. Ok think about it.
A hero just want to live a peaceful life, I do want to see that, erasing your own memory and restarting life sound like a fun way to go. I really hate the 140 characters thing, continue, don't spoil my fun.
Now.. Where should I start from?Story progress fast. MC is an immortal but acts like a teenager in first chapter.Some of you might drop it half way but don't!Casue there are kinky chapters waiting for you!???World building is not shown so far but according to the narration it's sounds big I guess? Moving fast forward.. The novel needs some polishing. Like author using "Yang" as "Ying" It's YANG! All in all, I have much hope for this novel. Let's hope author doesn't disappoint us. P. S. It's quite hard to write a review when chapters are less. Give us a mass release! That's all.
Author when are you gonna update this novel? ._.a or is this novel dropped?
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The author give the MC the power to summon super monster but **** it up but fucking nerf him with needing to be in around 100 meter near the fucking summon point there so many fucking way to kill him with longrange attack . Fucking dropping this ****
Shock! The novel is a piece of garbagetransmigration - checkbraindead MC - checkevery girl is jade beauty that instantly falls in love with MC - checkaphrodisiac relationships - checkdropped after 20 chapters - check
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Hey pleas keep going this seems very Intersting keep up the good workOkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Nice...like it so far...I can’t wait for more...keep...up...the...good...work...140...words...is...a...lot...and...long...too...long...ahhhh...
