I liked it a lot and was following the work for more than 3 years I hope it will be out of haitus
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This novel is Pathetic like seriously i am not even kidding . He has like 3 system how many 3. But still dumbass author make him weak and pathetic who sucks Harry potters dick.He says he doesn’t want to make Mc too op to keep story interesting . But when you read the novel you know author is just removing things from his ass.He has gamers mind but still dumbass Author forgets every-time he is scared , shaken, or can’t control his mood despite having Gamers mind.The very beginning chapter when he makes wishes you understand what kind of idiot Mc is .I tried reading it 2 time but cant its literally torture. To be honest this novel is **** . And author compromised the quality for quantity . I wish there were minus rating I would have given them . But sadly this is lowest rating I can give. You can see from the rating this novel is pathetic
paid from the start and its just the same chapter 24 times
The plot line is really unique. Your writing style is good too, it's direct and clear. But I would suggest you to split some sentences and separate them because they tend to become too wordy and sometimes a bit confusing. Apart from that, it's a really interesting read. Keep up the good work!
A very detailed narration of a story. It will make you immerse in the scenes as you imagine them. The characters and the settings become alive and colorful as the author describes them. The emotions of the characters are also portrayed very well through their actions and dialogues.The story seems to have a very complicated plot as the author introduces three important characters who have deep stories. This is something to be admired since stitching complicated details is not very easy.I really want to know how the author unfolds this grand plot, so I will keep on reading this novel!Also, I really like those Spanish dialogues! They just have this flare that really appeals to me!Great story. Please, keep on writing it!
I like reading novels like watching a movie. Small details about the color of clothes, culture, times, climate etc will greatly help me digest a written story.Maybe I'm in a hurry, hopefully the next chapters can be found such amazing details
Go fr it i love everything bout story plot fighting................................. Keep ur good work up???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
the book is interesting enough. anytime the readers would be hooked with this. I love that its descriptive to make the readers imagine : ))
Author’s shameless honest review :)I believe I am a good writer and note taker so their shouldn’t be many mistakes. But if you do find one pls leave a comment saying “found a mistake” no need to even give a reason. I will check it and fix it.The only thing I am worried about is how often I can post. I will try my best to do 1 ch a day. But problems may occur.I am very proud of the world I have created. It will have basic elements you see in system novels. But I dont think that’s bad as basic are basic for a reason. For example I love military arks.I have planned out the major plots of the story and I find it incredibly beautiful. My favorite books are Lord of myteries, Super gene, Castle of black iron,Legendary moonlight sculptor, and Supramcy games.I have taken inspiration from these and hundreds of other books I have read.
Not bad but too clichéLike most of the wn here the mc hide his talent not for me ???????????????????????????????????????????
5 Stars! This is has got to be one one of the best novels I've read! In fact it's so good that I actually decided to leave a review. I haven't left an actual review in around a year(not including exp reviews). Anyways it's super good. I personally love just about any story about Necromancers or Skeletons or Necromancer Skeletons. The MC is a cool skeleton necromancer dude, and his character is built super well. It's a tiny bit repetitive in the beginning, it has the usual "you killed this" " you leveled up" "you killed this" "you leveled up". But it gets better as your progress. The Author does a good job writing the fight scenes as well describing the environment and characters. As you get in the MC encounters civilization and is able to blend in and hide his his strength. This is also something I quit enjoy. I love reading about the cool, strong, mc's belding in with society and deceiving people. I'm not entirely sure about the consistency of updates, I just started reading this tonight, but the description says the Author updates 2-3 times a week. So based on that I'd say the updates are consistent. Additionally the chapters word count is in the 2,000's to 3,000's, so waiting a few days is worth it. It goes premium at chapter 47, but it's definitely worth using fast passes to keep reading. You can read 2 chapters ahead if you have the app (I don't). As I said the character design is done really good you can really connect with the mc in a way. Most of the MC's pre-reincarnation is hidden(as of right now), but it adds a certain sense of mystery to the MC. The World Background is also done stupendously. The Authors created his own fantasy world and has a done a good job introducing it. There's a chapter that introduces a lot of the background and the history of the world. One of the languages is a lost language called Germanium(I think I spelt that wrong), the author said it isn't German, but I refuse to believe that!The writing quality and the grammar is good, I haven't noticed any misspelled things, run-on sentences, punctuation errors. I think a reason for the updates times, is that the Author spends a lot of time going over and revises and fixing any mistakes. Additionally he gets feedback from the readers that helps him fix any mistakes. I can't really rate this area to well, as I'm German and English is a second language for me. But at least on my standards the grammar and just overall writing quality is awesome.All in all it's a super good story and I definitely would recommend reading.