This novel is Pathetic like seriously i am not even kidding . He has like 3 system how many 3. But still dumbass author make him weak and pathetic who sucks Harry potters dick.He says he doesn’t want to make Mc too op to keep story interesting . But when you read the novel you know author is just removing things from his ass.He has gamers mind but still dumbass Author forgets every-time he is scared , shaken, or can’t control his mood despite having Gamers mind.The very beginning chapter when he makes wishes you understand what kind of idiot Mc is .I tried reading it 2 time but cant its literally torture. To be honest this novel is **** . And author compromised the quality for quantity . I wish there were minus rating I would have given them . But sadly this is lowest rating I can give. You can see from the rating this novel is pathetic
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The story's eye-catching and most of all, thrilling. The flow is not too slow, and also not too fast. Just the right speed for the readers to enjoy. It's slightly difficult to predict how the plot is going to be because there's only a few chapters, but I see that there's definitely some plots within plots, and with more plots. I'm looking forward for more updates.To improve the novel more, I think that adding commas in between the long and tricky sentences would be a good idea so that the readers could understand more.