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not good at doing reviews but here we go. really nice story. the author is good at writing fighting scenes and I love how someone else loves the galaxies as much as me! this is really nice author, keep it up!
Great reading so far, i enjoy the developing characters , I enjoyed how the main character is rapidly progressing as we all wish we could. First love Is always a mystery , how long will it last, if it does
It's really good, you should read it
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So far I have read from chapter 1-50 the story has been progressing at a relatively fast rate however so far there are alot of things that could be improved. First of all the way the system does things is horrible imo. We have no information on the yearly and weekly quests at all, the exp system went from 1000 to 2000 to 9500 and then to 25000 which makes no sense at all. another problem I have with the novel is that it hides way too much information from the reader to the point where you don't really know what's going on. The last problem I have with the novel is that it keeps forgetting about quests and the rewards/punishments an example of this is when he gets completes a hidden quest and gets 10000 exp yet it does not add to his system at all and it was the same for another monthly quest which also had a bloodline upgrade.
Since I have read almost all available chapters, I am obligated to write a review.
Writing quality - I have no complains, there are no grammatical errors and flow is good(5 stars)
Update stability - 14chaps/week. (5stars)
Story development - so far it’s hard to judge, but considering all the mysteries the author has been giving us, it should be interesting. Until now, I like the way the story goes with the mc turning more into antihero, who still keeps his natural emotions.(5stars)
Character development - that’s the place author did a great a job. The reader can clearly see the change in mc’s character.(5 stars)
World background - Although I am still quite confused about the power system, but I am sure it will be explained more intently in the latter chaps(5 stars as well)
The story is great and I love it so far. It’s definitely better than 99% of the Wn books.
Btw the new cover is bomb.
it's a good read with daily updates and so far (chapter 116) characters are pretty well developed and the same can be said about the world background
Well I don't know why I read this, guess it's because of boredom but it wasn't really my cup of tea. However, opinions are subjective so I recommend reading it yourself and ignoring the other reviews befire judging the authors work.
A parody of MHA and Pokemon... say no more author, this is a five star for me. Will be looking forward for more updates! Have a great day author!!!!
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Sigh, i wish I don't have to write a review since I'm totally bad at writing, not to mention English is my 3rd language and I've never took any courses.
So pardon my grammar.
As you can see from my username, i like reading stories with OP protagonist, sadly a lot of it is just BAD.. Inconsistent numbers and stories, illogical decisions, negative IQ of the MCs, black hole of a plot hole, and many other things.
So when i stumbled upon this book, I'm only interested with its title, since this is the first time I've seen lv 2M.
But as i read it, i haven't seen any glaring plot holes, the writing is also quite decent, bar the occasional typo and some grammar mistakes. Some people may said that the plot is getting inconsistent at around ch20+, but i beg to differ.
It's not inconsistent, everything will make sense in later chapters, and i dare say that even veteran reader can get blindsided by this one plot twist.. Well, the twists actually, but other than one particular plot twist, you can still almost get it right from the details scattered in the story and paragraph comments.
That said though, there're some moments that I'd say rather forced, since it shouldn't happen normally, but it can still be reasoned with..
All in all, this book is quite good and I recommend you guys to stick with it until around ch40.
Keep up the good work author!
I never wrote a review for these trial novels, but I am honestly very surprised Webnovel went as low as showing this trash in the trial read.
Are they trying to rot our brains to death?
Like, this is a bellow 2 book and yet they still put in the trial read and have the audacity to call it one of the best rising books?
