The character is immature i don't hate it.
I really don’t know why am I reading this, I really thought that the author would become more discriptive of ..... well everything .
Right now what I am seeing and reading here is nothing but words on paper, no real feelings behind the words being said or the actions that are happening . I don’t really know if it’ll get better or anything, after all I only read till chapter 8 , but right now all I am seeing is emotionless dialog said by blank faces who we don’t even know who they look like , and chapters that seem to not really have a goal to them just a bunch of jumbled up words together .
Nevertheless I’ll keep on reading for the reason that brought all of you guys here, we ain’t got nothing else to read
Hello, the author here.
This is a gag novel.
There is little to no story, and the system is a sadistic, fujoshi. If this isn't your thing, then kindly leave.
What I can tell you, however, is that Jin Yahui will never be OP. In fact, he's weak and is scared of everything. He's human. If you expect some OP protagonist, kindly leave.
There isn't that much world-building, and for that I'm sorry. I'm an ******* author, and I'm trying my best.
If you don't like the story, then tell it in a civilized manner.
I don't appreciate a one-star when I at least deserve two ;)
¯\\_(ツ)_/ ¯
reading novels in webnovel app is way better
hope you continue
gogo get them allh
dont stop
gogo fast go go gooooooooo
ok accept review... why must it be 140 character
just trash
checked ahead on MTL novels just plain garbage .
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interesting concept but mc is so boring that it hurts.. he doesn't want to fight or even learn fighting and thinks he can just stay peaceful and cultivate
This is not a review,perhaps?
Lol i just want to recommend this story .
It has a great potential ,
Not overpowered at all but still the protagonist had enough of power to beat bad guys and tame beauty(ies?)
As the MC is growing up the flow also make every chapters become interesting.
Giving it a five stars because this story seems to be pretty unique compare to most light novels nowadays. The cover is interesting and the synopsis is good. If I had to give it an honest review just based off of all of this, then I would give it 4.25/5 but Qidian doesn't work like that so 5 stars it is then.
Good Story. I like the MC, he is cool and I can easily relate to him and he is not cocky so that’s good. His sister brings joy in me when I read something about her, that makes me like the novel even more.
I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for readers, I can tell you I don't have many friends to share this with, but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you continue the story through the end and have a satisfying ending, that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you, but if you EVER drop this, I will look for you... I will find you... and I will.... lock you in my basement until you continue writing :p
The first 150 chapter are good. But later on, the strory turn into nightmare... Keep trying to follow the strory till ch530, turn out it's hopeless... Completely BS... Really wasting time.
Author, I really like the story so far but its sad to see that this novel does not get the recognition it deserves. Which is why I have a proposition. Why don't you try reuploading the novel? You might get more readers that way and maybe even get a contract earlier.