I HATE how mc doesn't get to free use his friend's moms
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
The novel started off a bit slow but was great overall. In the first few chapters, the MC takes some time to build an emotional connection, but the transition involving the maid's sudden discard felt abrupt. It could’ve been handled more smoothly to build emotional tension.I've read around 45 chapters so far, up to the point where Gracile kiss the MC and goes to her home. The biggest issue I’ve noticed is that many chapters after chapter 15 could’ve been shortened or even removed entirely. I ended up skipping quite a few of them as they felt repetitive and dragged out. Honestly, I wanted to quit at that point, but the romance with the maid kept me reading .The author focuses more on the brighter side of the noble family, which I found refreshing and appreciated.I’ve only read less than 50 chapters in one go, skipping or fast-forwarding the repetitive or non-plot-related chapters. After finishing My House of Horrors, I tried some other novels like The Way of Kings, but I couldn’t get through the slow pacing. I also tried several titles on Webnovel, but finally found this one that kept me hooked through the first 50 chapters.I don’t have much time, but I’ll continue reading whenever I’m free. My request to the author would be to slightly increase the pacing, make every chapter plot-driven, and maintain a good balance between tension and romance. It feels like a pure romance novel at times, even though it’s supposed to be fantasy—but it’s still really good. So keep writing. Best luck.Additional Note: Please try to apply the "show, not tell" technique—it will make the story much more engaging and enjoyable.Sorry, I’m writing this review based only on the first 50 chapters. I’ll edit and update it after reading more.
I just git to chapter 24 and ai have to say it a pretty good book but Y is the MCs personality so messed up!!??? lLike he will be normal at 1 point then cold to everyone at another then he will be all friendly... like what kind of bullshit is that??? And Y is the MC with the kid that didnt awaken any soul-type or whatever??? Like he should be teaming up with others and especially girls... dont tell this book is going to have the MC turn out the be gay!!!?? If that happens this book is really going to suck!!
10/10Não sei oq dizer, história muito boa ein galera brso vaiarrocha
I have fun reading this.I think I will enjoy it more if you include more story about the Li Wei side of world. Thank You.
I have been reading since the chapter 1. it took like, a week for the chapter 2, but afterwards, there was a little explosion of newer chapters so im a bit confused but thankful nonetheless. I really want to know more about the world, but the story seems to be going through the slowburn route. Can't wait to see more!
really really really really really really really great
Like for likesNeed likes and I am sure not the only one.Let’ Karma it upBook is a good read as well.
Hello everyone, I am the author of this novel. First of all, I want to thank all the readers for their attention and support! I am very much looking forward to hearing your views and suggestions on the novel. If you have any thoughts, such as about the plot or character development, please feel free to express them here. I will carefully read every piece of feedback and make adjustments and modifications based on your opinions.
This is such a wholesome story!! I love the 'comfortableness' feel ingit bring when reading, such interesting plot and characters
Author here, it’s nice to meet you all! :)I’m going to try to update at least once a week. Please leave a rating if you can. It would be much appreciated!