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Well, the concept of the story is nice. Minor grammatical errors that can be fixed in a jiffy and other than that I feel some paragraphs were a bit long but I have the same problem but otherwise I think it's a well thought out concept
this story is for masochist, if you like mc abused by other people then this is story for you! event the first 18+ mc is r@ped by man. .
I am only 10 chapters in and i am typically more harsh with my reviews, but i think this novel deserves 5 stars. the grammar and flow could use a little work up until this point, but that can only be expected from a first time writer. The plot is really interesting so far and looks promising, and im really shocked that this novel isnt more popular, and cause there are no “real” reviews, i decided to write one despite not catching up on chapters.
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Shameless author review, I have really high ambitions for this novel and I hope you will follow along the twists and turns of the story! thanks
I love how you started, a kidnapping? Awesome?I like your writing style and it shows that you put a lot of effort into creating your characters and alternating their povs. Well done.?
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Well this is my sugestion for you :Good side :- Interesting character- Easy to readBad side : a bit spoiler- I dont get it why the MC is so rash and softie. I feel it become contradiction because actually he is smart and have strong wisdom that how the story line tell us.- I dont know how to say this mmmmm...that the story say he have character merchant but he lose so much.- He doesnt know politic, but still fooling around with noble. (I feel like crying now trust me.)Well the think make this bad because contradiction for what actually the MC do and the story line say. So, I mean example if he is hot blooded, he will love fight and easy get angry but if we make the contradiction that line become like this "He doesnt love to fight and calm person". Well this is still just my opinion but actually this story have well background but the story line sometimes tell us the spoiler, you can say that I more like doesnt know because it will have more surprise and we can feel the helpless side in MC.
Novel is so cliche and just really painful to read, not worth my precious coins. Everyone seems really stupid and ugg, the MC’s train of thought is just so baffling. and not only that, it turned premium so soon lol
The story is great! The chapters are a bit iffy because of some word mistakes and such, but man, a VR Moba that's similar to Lol and Dota 2? Count me in! The story really picks up after the first few chapters, although the MC isn't OP and lacks any knowledge of the game, but he's equipped with very great swordsmanship, courtesy of Mr. Ghost-san. The character development is also pretty clear and I can't wait to read more. I'd like to see how our MC takes his unambitious character and changes it for the better!