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The premise is interesting enough, and the story itself holds up quite well, with the writing and characters only enhancing the experience. It's an enjoyable time to be sure.
I'm loving the read. Nuff said.
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The plot is really interesting and the characters are easy to understand. The author is careful to unveil this new world to the readers and I recommend this book to everyone. You will get hooked instantly.
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Well, my review is based only on the free chapters since I was not fond of it very much. Grammar and writing are very good and the side characters don't look plain, so you don't have to worry about it.What bothered me was the mc's decisions and the novel's pace. MC's decision: he seems to lack normal life "intuition" since he almost get killed because he was an idiot. The novel's pace: we didn't find anything relevant about the world, since the MC stayed in the same place killing useless beasts which improved him at snail pace. I would understand if he wasn't improving that much in 40 chapters if we were getting good information about the world or an info dump but we got nothing. The only thing we know is all the basics: kill a monster and he drops experience. World-building: I have no comments since there is none, we know nothing about the world besides the same repetitive thing "monster spawning on earth". Analyzing only the free chapters, I can't give you a reason to choose this novel to read. There isn't something special/different about it, it's the same repetitive thing you can find in any other novel.If your intuition says "it is good I wanna pay for the chapters and find out". Do it, you may have a surprise and this may be the best novel you've ever read.
Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
Reading this on my first time in Webnovel app. Very satisfied. Excellent story with HAREM DAMN IT!!! A lot of sexy beauties too. Amazing parenting. More chapter please :)
Honest Review
Found this one has potential, feels a lot like Sword Art Online. (A very hard to read version of it.)
The Good: Character classes are unique and it is nice to see an MC that isn't 100% righteous for once.
The Bad: Hard to follow... it jumps around a lot with little to no indication. I found the world setting kind of convoluted and some of the situations to be pointless. It feels like a lot of this is filler content so far because I really only care about Shiro and people he interacts with.
The Neutral: Objectively describing someone as "sexy" leaves it open to interpretation, that's not a bad thing by itself, but who thinks it is sexy? (i.e. the observers, the characters, the readers, NPCs?) Maybe I missed it, but why are they stuck in the world?
Maybe add a note that senshi = warrior and the significance of it so people don't think "WTF are senshis? Sounds like sushi!" or something like that. (Assuming that is what you meant it to be)
Feel free to review back and I'll add you on Line if you would like editing help.
The cryptic undertone makes the story interesting. But I have to agree, translation from Chinese fantasy to English makes it much more challenging. Overall a good book to pick up! Hope future chapters gets better!!! To be honest, I saw the harem coming from a mile away
i tried to read it but its just not for me there may be people who enjoy it but i just cant do without a decent plot.........................
A masterpiece.. And for it to be dropped abd picking up trash generic novels.. Webnovel you're ****! Now I feel whole trial read system is ****! No point ..you don't see ratings you don't see views and readers opinions and just choose based on editors choice or your so called coins used of which we don't even get to see the data.. For fucks sake those novels it picked up won't even last long! Fcking generic trash novels..fck you!