GabrielSilva8900
I love the book. I started reading it in light reader and it was several chapters ahead the app stopped functioning.
I love how the story unfolds. It leaves me wanting more of it.
I love that it has a good flow and the grammar is okay.
Just update it faster.
Our dearly beloved protagonist is a hilarious and talented young master. His tolerance and determination knows no limits
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This is a great novel qnd i like it.
Author can you put a international tournament in this novel because that will be sick. Just like King Of Avatar Novel they have a tournament like a eSports.
I put my attention on this one if you keep uploading a new chapter. And i hope you put my request
Really recommend an editor so that the flow of the story isn’t interrupted. Should at least re-read so that sentences are properly made. ********************
I got scammed and its still a cuck book, nothing changed really. Heavy yuri and mc having fun looking at it..................................................................
bruh, when will this MF get pick up? I've been waiting since 1669. SMH
I love this story. It's the best story I've read about Bleach. I'm looking forward to what will happen and I hope author won't suddenly drop the story.?
Interesting at first but it doesn't really go anywhere. Author is too caught up trying to make the MC profound and mysterious that the same tropes are repeated over and over again. It just feels shallow and fake instead. No clue why so many people think this is good but different strokes for different folks I guess.
Garbage. He’s already “not servile nor overbearing”. It hasnt even been mentioned in the novel he was transmigrated, as though the author just expected us to read the synopsis. There are no signs he was transmigrated in the novel. It just looks like hes a native. Synopsis is complete clickbait. Powers cant be revealed for some stupid reason. Like, he cant reveal them because he would be killed by the government? Why? Completely stupid.
Please give this novel a shot. This is a great VRMMO novel with funny characters and cool moments. Where the king's avatar did not have world-building in Glory, this novel has lots of world-building within the VRMMO world.
Alright what to say what to say...Its great so far. The world is clearly described without going overboard and letting readers figure things out on their own. The mc is fun and can be relatable at times which is always a plus, the writing quality itself is great itself with the exception of a typo or two every now and then.
All in all this looks promising and its definitely worth a read, at least from what I've seen.
Crap story, mc focuses to much on Chinese toys
Impossible to eradicate knockoffs
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