loved this Story very good read. xxx
Loving it. The story has me hooked!!!!
wish i had negative rating senseless book. total diaster. a child can write it better
When are we getting an update...
still no updates as of 8/14/23
from chapter 74 to 124 its just a repetition of the same thing don't you re read your books.This is disappointing.
Love the story well done and more Grace
Finally! I was getting tired of all the other stories. Every time I look, it’s either a romance with a villainess or someone who reincarnated. If not those, it's a novel with magic and adventure that has leveling systems.
This is truly a breath of fresh air. I really love a powerful main character, and this novel delivers. Thanks a lot for this.
If you think this is going to be just another run-of-the-mill novel, oh boy, you’d be wrong! The novel turns out to be about a massive conspiracy that left me scratching my head even after finishing it ?. Maybe my brain isn’t sharp enough, but even the author had to apologize for how confusing the ending was!
Still, it’s a good read, just be prepared to put your thinking cap on!
This novel is a thrilling roller-coaster ride, and it can be incredibly satisfying if you share my tastes, such as seeing annoying characters get their comeuppance.
When I say it’s a roller-coaster ride, I mean the narrative has moments where it feels like you’re climbing to the peak of Mount Everest, only to plunge straight down into the Mariana Trench, then climb back up again. The beginning can be quite bland, but once it picks up momentum, things get really engaging. So, you might start feeling like you're at the bottom of the Mariana Trench before you realize how high the ride can go.
Here are some key points that some reviewers who gave low ratings might have missed (minor spoilers included):
- **Why does the sword MC have a human figure as a doppelganger, and why doesn’t Fran (the wielder) question it?**
Fran knew that the sword was once a human. Additionally, the sword can create doppelgangers, and it’s likely that his human form is a result of his past life being embedded in the skill.
- **How can he fly, even though it’s through telekinesis?**
In the manga, it’s shown that the sword was "created" or "blessed" by three goddesses. He possesses unique properties similar to Godblades or Divine Blades, but he isn’t a Godblade himself. Instead, he has unlimited growth potential, setting him apart from other blades. This makes him something greater, and it remains a mystery for now.
- **The cooking competition arc seems boring, but it’s actually part of the plot:**
This arc introduces the Evil God and its minions, showcasing their power. The finalists are chosen based on income and customer numbers, which hints at the idea that consuming certain foods can grant buffs or debuffs. One of these debuffs could be a curse from the Evil God. This ties into the broader plot, as the Evil God is a major driving force behind the story’s development.
- **Critics say the novel is bland, especially due to the boring start.**
Rating a novel based solely on its initial impression is like judging a person without getting to know them fully. You need to give it a chance to develop, just as you would in real life when deciding whether to trust someone or not.
If you enjoy fantasy RPG elements, give this novel a try. As someone who has played RPG games, I found it highly enjoyable. If you share my interests, you won’t regret reading it.
One of the novel’s likable aspects is how the sword MC evolves from a typical isekai pervert to a caring and guiding father figure for Fran. Despite being locked away for months and wasting a significant amount of Evo-Points (similar to Skill Points), he only experiences a brief period of insanity. This transformation is surprising and adds depth to his character, making him a more relatable and admirable protagonist.
TLDR: The main girl is the worst, skip unless you enjoy reading about messed-up stuff. The start is decent but falls flat afterwards. Save time by reading Volume 1, wiki summaries, and Chapter 179.
Long explanation:
The story starts off well, but Yue's inclusion ruins it. The focus on a single 12-year-old is inhumane and not convincingly portrayed in a web novel. Yue's beauty is overhyped, and her character lacks depth beyond her looks. The shift to multiple relationships doesn't work because of the attachment to Kaori, who deserved better development. When Kaori's arc doesn't pan out, the connection to the story weakens.
Yue's character is a child-like figure, despite being portrayed as an adult. Other characters like Shia and Kaori have more personality and are likable, while Yue mainly serves as a plot device. The potential for a compelling harem or emotional journey with Kaori is wasted, turning the story into a disappointment.
Battle scenes are mostly filler and uninteresting, except for a few notable exceptions. Overall, the first volume sets false expectations, and the rest of the story suffers greatly due to Yue's negative impact. Rating: 1/5 for the series, with some points for the first volume and individual characters. Yue deserves a significant deduction for her role.
"It's an excellent novel featuring a well-developed protagonist who isn't your typical assassin, which stands out from many of the stories I've encountered."