Ivan87lUB
Hell yeahhhhh. I'm soo excited that this is getting picked. I've been waiting for months now.
Also for those who are complaining, when trial read was introduced webnovel said that it might bring back the novels that didn't get picked before. So please stop rating it low just because this was picked. Cuz there are many including me who are waiting with hope that trial novels which didn't get picked before get picked.
Also above thing isn't the reason I rated this 5. It's because I freaking love this novel. Do give this novel a try if you like iras kinda troupe with no racism bs but with video games.
I'm really sorry for my grammar guys. I'm pretty sure I fked it up badly.
I know I didn't give 5-stars, but this is still a 10/10 I would recommend novel.
it's good book but the long explanation makes my brain hurt................................
So,3 stars.................................................
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I like this new book alot. Different take on village building. Author also keeps MC grounded in his growth. it's not just OP as hell system shenanigans
我是废土巨人
This is the name of the book in Chinese..
Currently has around 223 chapters available to read
(How many Characters do you need to post a review? never ends)
1- writing quality: I’ve read the twelve chapters that are out so far and found only a few mistakes. The writing style didn’t exactly do much to hold my attention, but it’s fine. How ever the system prompts are very annoying, reading all of them could take some time.
2-update stability: Ive read the first twelve chapters in a day or to so I don’t know how often author updates.
3-story development: in the twelve chapters I’ve read the story hasn’t gotten the chance to develop very far, but its a good start.
4-character design: all of the characters are based on sea creatures. only two of the characters have a defined personality, them being MC and his only friend/side kick
5-world background: I can’t say much on the world background. however, I like the setting.
It will look better if you change the cover of the story.
this is an amazing book read you won't regret it the mc is someone who would do anything for the people he cares about and while he may make mistakes he trys to learn from it all
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Am I the only one who has never seen the MC avoid spells and only counter them? And causing him to be hit back by the difference in cultivation? She should be fast as her element is wind but she was just throwing energy here and there.
Will he learn to fight then? Please answer because I will continue or not depending on the author's answer.
What I mean above is about volumes 1 and 2. If I'm wrong then please show me. Because I'm reading this in a bad mood.
Finally wanted to give this novel a review after almost 800 chapters. This novel is one of the best ones in this site and one of the only novels I read daily. The latest power boost for the MC had increased my interest in Emery and I guess this novel finally can deserve it's spot in Top 15 Golden tickets if it proceeds interestingly and hope you don't mess up the Morgana part when Emery goes back to Earth.
