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nice one just kinda stupid enough to mc who has a gift but cant use it efficiently. but overall the story is good and i cant wait to read the next chapter. i hope this novel will be chosen by webnovel for publish. nice job author ?
Es muy bueno la Historia, sin duda el MC se mantiene fiel a su Rol de Villano de segunda y su personalidad se mantiene en su mente bien centrado y no pensar con la cabeza de abajo o el estúpido del corazón y sus emociones y sentimientos sobre el mundo donde habita se manteniendo fiel y al parecer no se podra cambiar(lo cual es bueno...despues de todo lo que le hicieron)(Muchos autores que hacen este tipo de historias deberian aprender de esta trama siendo sincero xd) y el desarrollo de MC es muy bien desarrollado, pueden verlo como el clasico ingenuo a mitad de la historia, pero todo gira a 180 grados a medida que avanza la historia de cuan cruel, frio y indiferente en realidad lo convirtió el mundo novedoso, La Heroines al menos tienen vergüenza de sus actos lo cual es muy bueno para su desarrollo, Solo faltaria escenas del Delicioso y sin duda seria 10/10
This is my first time writing a review so don't judge me. I am here to talk about this novel and I must say that it has a lot of potential and quite relatable at the same time, especially for students. Personally this would be my dream school and most likely everyone else's once they start reading. I highly recommend this to everyone but please don't criticize or judge my review if the novel doesn't meet your expectations, we all have our own preferences and my review is just based on the currently available chapters which is 20.Note for the author/translator:Keep up the good work and I hope this gets selected, the novel is really amazing and I highly appreciate it??✨
This us about a man who became a father before he was thrown into the river... thanks to that he became an immortal. With the cultivation of the heavenly emporer's power he embarks on a journey to find his dear wife at the same time take revenge on people who offended him earlier... Very thrilling time to read.... except the part where he kills a load of people
It is a really good story honestly. When I first saw this I thought it would be kind of like MHA, but it wasn't. That is both good, and bad. You see in the anime MHA it has a very heavy focus on the superpowers. That's not the case in this one. While yes there are a ton of different powers we see, some cliqued like Jackson, who just uses lightning, and some that I haven't seen in another seriers like Dawson, Hero, Kitsune... So on. So far I can happily say I've seen some super cool powers. But that isn't really the focus of the story. The power system is more like Bleach I guess. Everybody has there own uquie powers, but then there is a power that everyone can use. Or like One Piece where everyone has a devil fruit, but Haki still exist to. Enforcers is kind of like that. While everyone does have their own superpower, the superpower itself isn't the main focus of them. We see a lot more weapons, and even mixing powers, and magic. This definitely has a lot more of a fantasy feel to it compared to MHA. Now the powers being a big deal, but not the main focus is both good and bad. It adds on more to the story, but at times it will rebound and go on all about a power. Basically it can verify sometimes randomly making it confusing. Also the chapters are kind of long. If you like really big stories then this one if perfect, but if you want a chapter you can just read and put down then look else where. The plot is constantly being expanded but isn't rushed, and most of the times it will take a few chapters for something to be resolved. Now this isn't to bad, but the chapters are so long that you'll spend a few hours just reading through Volume one which isn't even done yet... In that regeard I would say this is like One Piece where it is long, but still has a lot happening. Thankfully the story itself is pretty good so you don't have to worry about reading something boring. One thing the author is just amazing at is writing the characters. Like 45% of a chapter is just a bunch of characters talking, and that is okay belive it or not. The characters are funny, and feel real, while still maintaining a sort of over the top anime feel. So all in all this story does have quite a few problomes such as length, and pacing, but I still think that if you have time, and you want to see some badass powers, then pick this one up.
love it so far moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee
I just finished this novel [Raw (microsoft translator)] and I love it!!! As always no end satisfy me, but the jurney that the MC go through is really enjoyable and exiting. I really recoment this novel for everyone that loves a empire building and...... face smacking.One thing that I super like about this novel was that is able to manage time skip really well and never let the story go dull and boring. Eventhough the las 50 chapter went super fast, they do not lacked on hype or excitement.
Using cliffhangers same way repeatedly on each chapter! ITS not the fking damn Soap Operas with never ending story.Stupid novel stupid Author Stupid Translator Stupid Webnovel
This novel is absolutely godlike I find myself extremely exited every time I see that this novel has been updated. It is one of the best novels I have read in my career thus far. Thank you author for writing this amazing novel.
网游:开局无限BUFF天赋!ongoing - 296 chapterMc have OP talent and very thick plot armor so if you don't like OP mc dont trya bit spoiler : this story which game can affect reality
I honestly think that this is one of the best stories I've read so far, and I've read a lot. Everything about is well-thought and unique, (little to no tropes) and it never felt dull and it was all fleshed out. This has been a popular story for a while. So I recommend and suggest you read this story, here's why:Translation Quality: The translations are great, (as expected from Qidian) and the story makes me laugh as the protagonist smacks the faces of people who underestimated him, I've seen little to no errors at all concerning grammar or punctuation and it makes it easy for you to understand what's happening.Updating Stability/Speed: It ticks me off since this story is one of the best I've read so far, I constantly wait and there are many other people like me out there. 1 chapter everyday for 5 days in a week isn't enough, taking into account the quality of this story and how brilliant it is. Thought the updating speed isn't good for those impatient, the stability is true to it's word. They always update every day which is enough for me.World Building: It slowly builds up and doesn't just throw a bunch of information at you expecting to have to have powers like the main character here (unless you do). The build up of the world is decent but it just doesn't explain enough really about the roles and the other places other than where the main character is. It just gives you the information you need where you are.Character Design: The characters are well-fleshed out and their are no characters being introduced that are basically just 2-D with no personality. They all have a role and even if they play a minor one they are mentioned a few more times later on in the story. The characters develop throughout the story and don't just have the same personality.Story Development: The plot of the story is very interesting as it is, I've read many online and translated novels and this barely follows any tropes, (you can't expect there to be none with so many stories). It also goes at a decent pacing that is persistent, (he doesn't just rise 4 realms in 1 go). You can expect the plot to be great as it's very unique, I was always wanting more and it never felt dull.You can expect the story to be brilliant and splendid, you will always be on the edge of your seat! I rate this 4.6 stars!
