I’m not sure how to write a good review, but I’ll try.So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesn’t soffucates the reader. The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action. The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way.The story doesn’t seem to present plotholes that won’t, or can’t, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive.Though I’m singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didn’t find any.Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but don’t have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room).As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, we’re in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed.I don’t think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.
Kenji and I activate our Magic Eye and soon after, we can see and hear humans around the place.
I and my friends give the homework to Mrs.
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Sasha didn't argue after that. She kept quiet and hugged him back. They stayed like that for a while until the supreme one finally interrupted.
"Thank you," he said.
En el salto de Longitud logre llegar hasta el otro extremo sin tocar la arena al crear plataformas o de un salto potente.
Ingrit*
" Terima kasih " kata Akeno dan pergi kembali ke belakang dan kemudian berdiri di sampingku.
I can't move. the stars have left me now and I'm standing on a hill looking over a beautiful little village. Except I'm not really standing. I'm kind of leaning. There's no weight on my legs but I'm upright and I can look everywhere. It's like having 360 vision all the time. i look out onto the village and breathe in the fresh morning dew.
I could use a little fuel myself
And all that glitters is gold