The story was good well the translation. If the writer make the mc a lowkey person then why not make the mc live in a place with no cultivators and be a landlord or farmer. The daughters can be train and be discipline if they live in rural areas without arrogant people in it.
one of the best novel in terms of plot and character development.. all elements you want in an adventure story...from childhood to growing up.. the hero is powerful but not the strongest and it's not the typical powering up... multiple subplots add to the fun... a must read imo
5 stars! This book has the potential, I love your writing quality so much, this being your first novel is already amazing! Please continue to write more, the story overall is intriguing, good job! keep up the good work, Author!
first 40 ch is like a bait. after ch 41 the language becomes all over the place because of mtl. just stay away from this
As of reading the first 20 chapters (Up to date) I've been very impressed with the book. Interesting plot points, the "heroines" being aware of the story through the MC's thoughts is a great twist. Discovering their attempts to change or secure their fate is incredibly interesting. Having both heroines trying to now stay with the MC while others are already infatuated with the "protagonist" keeps the vibe refreshing. Definitely pick up the book for a read, I look forward to more in the future!
A really good story! I recommend it for those people who are open minded ? also I really like it already because of the innocent not so innocent Female lead hope she will grow strong ☺ Although it's just the beginning I know this will be a great story in the future ?
Translation quality and stability and all that stuff is good as usual, but the story itself is terrible. Plot development isn't anything special, pretty repetitive imo. Worst part is the characters don't feel like people, I don't think I've read a LN where so much illogical stuff happens, I know its a Ln and its not meant to be realistic but this is cringe to the point where i pity the translators who were unlucky enough to translate this..some examples (may be spoiler)- Picks up peerless beauty from streets for 10 silver - idk man makes sense- When he moves to inner sect, of the 3 most beautiful girls, 2 are his neighbour and the other one lives with him...- That girl he picks up on the streets yeah, she's 150% devoted to mc... like wtfff she retarded or something???Overall - pretty bad, pretty generic, nothing special, like a downgraded version of MGA or AST.Don't read unless you've read everything else, probably will make u disappointed. Definitely not worth your time
I'm not getting one thing straight in my head. Why that Izan forcing Cassandra to work with Michael. Doesn't he knows what type of person that Michael guy is? Hmmm... Suspicious behaviour
I loved it
Amazing, Amazing book! One of my faves by Muse, Yilenya is an amazing strong female lead and Theon… well you don’t know whether to love or hate him most of the time. A serious must read!!
i love this book
This is a great story, however this book is so full of mistakes, it seems like another book sometimes gets mixed in in the sentences so it doesn't make any sense to the reader.