I won't even lie, this is amazing. I'm adding this to my library. I could relate so much to the description because I still get nightmares more than dreams. I know the struggle. The first chapter blew my mind away, Jane's character is great. I hope you write a story about just dream, developing it further with your imagination. Kudos!
The good thing about reading MCs progress through the novel is you get to feel his earlier struggles. It's normal for readers to be frustrated about MCs weakness, but when he achieves the level where he deserves to be, I imagine it would be so much more rewarding. Waiting for that point for this MC. As for writting quality, the author's writing improve as he makes more chapter. Good job author.
As of now, it's actually pretty good. Original idea, a baby raised by a dragon basically. Plus the baby is a Transmigrator. So yeah, got my vote so far.
Hi I'm the reader here so here is my humble review about the book. At this point I read about 72 chapter it is pretty good if I say so. writing quality is good and the user is pretty much independent of the system by going through his own life by his own story. Not like chineese OP MC. so it's an 95/100 for me
Great characters, they feel almost alive as I read and imagine them all interacting with each other. It is a great standalone story, and I believe as a fan of the author's Quillverse series that it will only get better as the story progresses.
Unique and nicely blended. There was a point in the story that 2 characters went different paths but in almost every chapter, the author covers both of them. Well done.Story is still young at chapter 100+ and I foresee countless seasons to come.
Writing is well paced and neat, which I appreciate very much as it makes it easy to the eye. I believe the story hasn't delved into its core yet and will be waiting for the upcoming chapters. The world is fascinating, however it would be even better if you described it in more detail. But one thing I want to say is do write at your own pace as you seem to be juggling two novels, and that is a very brave thing to do, if I say so myself XD Keep it up but don't forget to take breaks once a while!
This criminal is about to learn in alternative reality he is in for a fight in the journey past the arc of women. His landladies will be mean. It is Chase Norris like a lonely Texas Ranger in my eyes are seeing this well developed piece of literature I cannot stop enjoying!
The prologue took my ducking breath away! Seems like writing in present does have its perks, as it really gave the feeling of 'urgency' writing in past tense doesn't have. As for the idea, isn't it conpletely fresh? Don't you guys want to see where this is going to go? So anyway, thumbs up to the author. I hope you continue writing this novel.
ayo broth if you are reading this don't drop this flipping fanfic send him to anime or novel, manga, manhwa, manhua. if you want to just don't drop this!
It's good, it's nice, it's fantastic, it's amazing, it's great! It's exciting, probably, it's excellent, it's breathtaking, very much want to read. I'M SERIOUS!
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