Read this book on GT. It was one of my first Webnovel that I’ve ever read, and one of the best in my opinion. Humor is subtle and the plot is great.
Alright. If you are looking for something proper that makes sense. Then this isn’t for you. If you just want randomness that will be funny then sure. And before some idiot comes and say how I am being a troll. I will list it out.
1. The author tries way too hard to make the MC seem so good at this game. His struggle is so much so it makes him so great. Smh. Meanwhile no game like this would sell with such crappy features. Unless this is the alpha and major ass updates are needed.
2. Super big plot contexts that contradict. And a game that is so super advanced and supposed to apparently be a lighyear ahead pioneer shouldn’t have such. Smh.
3. The forcefulness of the pushing realistic VR to combine game elements and reality to the point that it doesn’t make sense. It’s like the author wants a reincarnation VR story but doesn’t do it as good as legendary mechanic or others.
4. I have seen reincarnation system stories with more believable and sensible system management.
5. It honestly feels like the author has never played any proper games or read and learnt from VR game stories.
It has so much wasted potential. But that is just my point of view. I’m a serious gamer so I am fickle about the gaming aspect.
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This is a phenomenal book written by a great person. The author has done well with what is written, but has not finished the story. This is one of my favorite books on the site and I would love to see it finished.
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https://m.qidian.com/book/1025025602/617443502 this is a link where this can be read since this site doesn't want to post it ...............
It's amazing to see little girl which everyone thought without any background, has a powerful ancestor.
I really delighted when reading.
I hope it get choosen.
I love this book. I have lost count of how many times I have reread it. The writing quality isn’t the best, the characters (other than the main) are slightly 2-dimensional, and the overall plot is a bit cliche. HOWEVER, the character development is great, and the dialogue is natural. Mike definitely feels like an edgy, and neglected, kid just entering his rebellious phase, which most of you can relate too, I’m sure.
This novel may be very rough around the edges, yet it keeps drawing me back due to how natural the characters feel, and how natural their decisions seem. Mike makes decisions that feel completely realistic for the angsty youngster he is. This is completely different from most novels on this platform where most characters are so forced it becomes painful to continue reading, or are so obviously written with minimal thought that I want to take away the author’s keyboard and beat them with it.
Certainly, there are times reading this novel where I want to bonk the author on the head and ask, “What were you thinking???” Even still, I have come to thoroughly enjoy the experience of reading this novel. I am likely to continue rereading this novel many times to come.
i recommend better character development of the mc n i would like to ask why is the mc kinda dumb? well no offence and so that why im giving this a chance to upgrade so keep up the good work ◉‿◉ just remember he's an S class adventurer ok?
So I came here for a review swap and wasn't sure what to expect going into this book. I recently got out of my Books with Systems phase and was quite tired of all the systems that were A) cute, fluffy but utterly useless and B) cold, mechanical, calculative and just using the mc for its gain (and the mc that is given no choice but to obey albeit unwilling). Imagine how elated I was when here comes a system that HELPS the mc. Even if Genesis doesn't give out impromptu missions like a game (I like this), just the originality of the borrowing system sold the story to me.
Plot wise, I have nothing to say. 5 stars. The author was more focused on character development than world building in the first few chapters but luckily it didn't drag on for too long. Mysteries and more Genesis scenes prompted me to not skip-read, and I'm glad I didn't.
The MC is smart, hilarious and the way his system functions is definitely the most unique one I have ever read. The only problem is sometimes the past and present tenses get mixed up and I get confused.
All in all, this is an intriguing and interesting story. If the grammar errors can be corrected, I will rate it perfect stars. Best of luck author!
I love romance stories, i read romance light novels, i read shoujo manga, i've read a lot of these types of stories but the type that has a historical setting never made my sights but this one after giving it a read i have to say we got a great romantic story in the making here, impacable grammar, interesting characters, and a rare but welcome setting Egypt, are a few things that will make me come back for more so keep it going author this is promessing!
I love this but those updates man, they make me lose hope. But seriously good though, totally reccomend when you like that kinky cock blocking stuff because this is literally it.