best in this new batch of novelsmc gets stronger by fishing ancient beastsisnt complete idiotmaybe its time to go back to simple ssystem novels like thisit probably isnt anything new, but i enjoyed reading this
It ’s ok. Hope it continues to stay that way ????????????????????????????…………………………………………………………###############################
This novel has high potential to be awesome.
This 140 chacter review thing is pissing me off
Fun story, doesn't really fall into the trap of most of these types of stories. The issue being that they're charging some insane **** to read it. Like 100 SS per chapter. That would mean every 5 chapters is 10$. That means 50 chapters is 100$.... 500 chapters is 1000$. Greed has made these people LOSE THEIR FREAKIN MINDS. I don't think it needs to be said, but don't support this garbage
Story should be tagged as a Slice of Life and nothing else. Any parts that involve cultivation or fantasy all feel forced. Author would rather talk about the nice places they go to eat.
The update stability is also garbage. Stay away until they figure their sh*t out.
I was thoroughly intrigued by this novel. What started from just reading a chapter or two lead me to read 13 chapters. Everything is good, the story, the words the author uses to convey his thoughts and the general concept. There were a few mistakes here and there but I believe that the author can improve himself as he seems to value the opinion of his readers. I will be waiting for new chapters of this great novel
This is how you do a system novel. Very enjoyable and the author does a great job setting up the world and the characters before simply throwing the protagonist into the gaming world. Excellent world building, the author paints a picture so vividly of a fictional society in the near future. The protagonist is also a well-rounded character one can feel sympathy for. One who has had a bit of a rough go, losing his parents and floating through life without any real purpose. I look forward to seeing how he handles the gaming world. The story is also very well written and flows nicely, making for an all round enjoyable reading experience. Great effort!
lllllllloooovvvvvvveeeee iiiiiiiiiiiittttttttt, really fits my bill, keep going author you aren't half bad in my opinion give me a good time will you
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