Good book loved the story development as well as writing quality
I love the premise of this story. Reminds of me 12 winged seraphim's book: Supergene. Carry on writing, bro. Looking forward to seeing your books growth.
The writing style got me hooked right off the start. It's very vivid which is a must in fantasy novels. I highly recommend you check it out if you're lookin for a fantasy novel to read.
Reward .
um bro ireally like your doupo fanfic what happen to it, did you drop it??
It was very good to read this ,You have saved me from depression.I was about to kill myself but your novel the Phaser saved meI will never let go of this feeling I owe my life to you
Overall it being your first work is understandable.The Little bits of Information before the start of the chapter was Good touch as it allowed us readers to understand it a little bit.But the chapter seemed to be a little bit to short and overall the tone was a bit rushed and just the atmosphere was little different with the characters reactions being bit bland and not expressed to well, but overall it decent for a new author, Welcome to World of Web-Novels!
It’s ok, to read and I am pretty sure this novel take inspiration from most of Get Lost novel(the writers of the way of devil, nightmare call and dll) but if he can do well this gonna be good novel if not… welll it just gonna typical novel.
great history and character development, recommend
I like the concept but there is absolutely no world building or any sort of background.
Author is here. Give me feedback for this book! I’ll try my best to adjust.
I really don't like the personality of the MC I don't know it's poorly done it gets boring over time but other than that it's a good novel if you're looking for a good read with an unapologetic MC. I'm going to stop (I was on chapter 210)