a brilliant start to what could have been a good story however before anything real happens the story is cut off. no conclusion just abandoned by the looks of it and therefore labelled as complete which is so far from the truth that it is truly ridiculous.loved the story so far but now feel cheated to the extreme and want a refund!!!!!!
The story's basically combining a number of systems to create one system that provides basically everything to the MC without him having to really do anything. It's also got the usual cliche super handsome MC, but made worse by the MC being a complete idiot who blanks out on noticing there's a girl with him, and also who responds to someone attacking him and trying to kill him (and straight up telling him) with confusion and, again, blanking out. He also constantly gets lost in his own head, where the author takes time to dole out exposition in situations where he should really be focusing on what's in front of him. I don't expect a hypercompetent MC, but I'm certainly not interested in reading about a mentally challenged, milquetoast of an MC who behaves like he's never held a girl's hand before.
Heyo! Your boy Cat King here with a casual review. I know there have been a lot of sign up novels lately but I for some unknowable reason really like this one. Got my adrenaline pumping while reading and all in all had a good time but maybe it’s the delirious haze I have at 3 A.M right now that blinds me to all flaws but still. Anyway I recommend you all to read it or give it a chance at least.... really in the morning when Iwake up once again I might delete this review but for now I had good time and I hope you will have a good time reading this novel or otherwise.
Honestly, another copy and paste novel.The story is just boring. Mc is basically turns into an idiot when he gets money and expenses stuff and simps on any girl that comes his way.
Don't read, it's a disgrace to all writers in the world.????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Lmaoooo this is sooooooo troll it's pretty fun to read when u have nothing to do in class right before your finals but it has no real plot XD. At least it's funny?
como segunda reseña que hare de esta novela, solo diré que el nivel de escritura se ha mantenido y ha mejorado un poquito, lo cual hace que sea una muy buena lectura, la descripción del lugar faltan un poquito como por ejemplo saber cuantos pisos tiene, cuantos apartamentos por pisos y como es la decoración de cada lugar, incluso el apartamento del Mc apenas se que tienen 2 cuartos, un cuarto oculto, los baños respectivos, una cocina y una sala, mas que hay 4 (creo?) colegios religiosos femeninos cercanos, pero es entendible ya que no es muy necesario hacer toda esas descripciones desde el comienzo de la historia, mientras que poco a poco se describa y se muestre como es el mundo de la novela esta bien, ya que tenemos el esquema básico.las escenas de limones son bastantes disfrutables y emocionante, espero con ansias todo lo que me vas a mostrar, solo diré que me gusta mucho como ha sido hasta ahora y solo puede ir mejorando si sigues así.la velocidad de liberación de capítulos es agradable y solo motiva a uno a estar pendiente cada día de cuando liberaras cada capitulo.algo que falta un poco es en la descripción del MC. aunque en lo personal es opcional hacerlo ya o después.no se que tienes planeado para cada detalle así que solo diré. espero sorpresas de las buenas y gracias por el esfuerzo.(después de leer mas de 20 capitulo desde mi ultima reseña)
although there are issues with grammer etc, i love this novel . keep going !!!,!,!,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..!.!!!!,!!,!,!???..!!!!,,,,,,,,,,,,,!,!!,==¢÷`^`×|×^~|¶¶`Π^~÷`×~Π÷€|°`×€√~`=|^÷|÷|×`°~^``¶∆`°|Π|Π`°€×€°°÷`×`×°©™®×¢`℅`]
In the previous recent interview that the Author conduct with his fans in China,he said that : "In this game you can be [a Main Tank, Level 200, Tier 6, Saint Legacy Class]..... , and if the person you are facing is Li QiYe that is level 0 with a starter Trash rank weapon, he still can 1-hit kill you.." All your power in real life is gonna be applied in this game and ignore all enemy attributes, even if you completely silenced.. the Author also said to all his readers, especially in WN: F*ck you! this is my f*cking novel, I can bullsh*t what the f*ck I want!... Eat Sh*t! ????
Little background, this would has a cultivation system of sorts and people kill monsters to loot Crystal's that give stat boosts, qi and skills. Ok the mc funds an old cell phone that has a game that when he plays it it's like el, where when he kills a monster in game and lots a crystal the power comes through the phone and upgrades his body. The start the mc is considered a genius until a new person transfers in and kicks his butt then after the student transfers out, long story short his dad remarries and the new step kids do whatever they can to jack with the mc from kicking his butt to trying to make him not able to get in college. The mc has never met these 2 kids they just do it to be asses. The story seems ok it's nothing too exciting. So for short mc plays a video game to get stronger, dads new kids do everything they can to haze the mc and wreck his life for no reason.
This would be a good time for Brendan to find out who's the master mind backing Charlene, finding Dee's mom, is her father alive or not, Brendan's mom living years longer, Dee getting her eyesight back, her having boy and girl twins, they finally get remarried, and living happily ever after.
love the story!!