Hello there everyone greetings! I'm a new writer and author I hope you guys enjoy my first ever longest and first ever published novel I know there are a few misunderstanding and mistakes you guys can comment about it because I'm new I hope I can learn more from you guys, and don't forget to review and vote power stone it help me a lot as a new writer thank you so much everyone I hope you guys understand
Hey, welcome again to my latest work (applies to those familiar with my previous works). And to the new reader, welcome aboard. Are you wondering what’s happening this time around? Well, I’ve ventured into the realm of magic and isekai for this newest story of mine. If you’ve heard of or read "The Wizard of Oz," then you probably have an idea of what to expect. I won’t say I copied such works, but it so happens that my ideas intertwine with them. Anyway, I’ve been rambling too much. I hope you all enjoy this new story as I continue to give my best and entertain you all. Thank you for reading and checking out the story.
I am very happy to find a well written beast taming story that actually focuses on the beast taming and raising aspect. I am currently at chapter 90 and so far there are no major issues I can point out, no grammar mistakes, no missed used words and no strange word choice, making it easy to read. The monsters each have their own unique traits and personality, and the characters are diverse enough to keep the story interesting. The world building we have had so far is good, modern tech and architecture that sometimes has a magical twist and I can't wait to see more of the magical side and monsters that has been hinted at. Its a too early for any major character development so I can't speak on that yet. I have only read mecha warrior system from this author which was a good novel and this is shaping up to be just as good, however I do hope there is a little more romance than there was in that story. For stability of updates author seems to be updating plenty of chapters just like his other stories and isn't known to drop off the face of the earth like many other novel authors on webnovel.
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Interesting concept for sure. Always good to see new fresh ideas! Excited to see where the story goes and how the main character will change and develop.
This story is a masterpiece it is soo good thanks for writing this story but chapter release are slow so please upload chapters faster.Thanks!!!
I just started reading this novel, and I’m really enjoying it so far! The worldbuilding and concept are fantastic, and I truly believe this story has immense potential. Since the author is open to feedback (which I really appreciate), I’d like to share some thoughts. First, I’d love for the novel to avoid becoming an absolute power fantasy (like Solo Leveling). While those stories have their audience, they often feel generic and waste potential. A well-balanced progression will make the journey far more engaging. Character development is another crucial aspect. The MC should be well-rounded and compelling, but side characters should receive just as much attention. Many readers get attached to the world by immersing themselves in the lives of side characters, sometimes even more than the protagonist. If side characters are dull, unlikable, or lack depth, it weakens the story’s immersion. Some of the best and most popular works thrive because of their supporting cast, so the more dynamic and fleshed-out they are, the better. Regarding power scaling, I’d prefer a balanced approach where the MC is strong but not the undisputed strongest. It’s more interesting if there are multiple characters—whether allies, neutrals, or enemies—who can rival or even surpass the MC in strength. This forces the MC to be more cautious and strategic rather than steamrolling through every challenge. Intelligence should also be handled realistically. If the MC starts as just above average, it wouldn’t make sense for them to suddenly outthink nearly everyone they meet with flawless schemes. Even if they are highly intelligent, there should be others who are just as, if not more, intelligent and capable of countering them. Not every plan should succeed perfectly—sometimes things should go wrong, even when the MC seemingly has control. The world should feel unpredictable and realistic, where not everything conveniently works out in the end. On romance, while it’s not a necessity, it’s natural for characters to develop romantic interests. However, many stories mishandle this, particularly with harem tropes where almost every opposite-gender character inexplicably falls for the MC. Just being cool or good-looking shouldn’t make the MC an automatic love magnet, especially in a world where many characters might share similar qualities. A more balanced approach—where romance is spread among different characters rather than revolving solely around the MC—would feel more natural and add richness to the story. In summary, I’d love to see well-developed side characters (perhaps even more interesting than the MC), a power system where the MC isn’t the undisputed strongest, and a realistic take on intelligence and strategy where plans don’t always work out. If romance is included, a balanced approach without generic harem tropes would be great. Regardless of how the story unfolds, I’m confident it will turn out great. Even though I’m still in the early chapters, I’m absolutely loving it so far!
Honest reviews are here..[Spoiler Alert]I also started reading the novel after reading this novel synopsis.. Seriously, the synopsis is quite attractive and makes the story seem different from other novel.. But it is not.. In the early chapter, you already feel the rushing of the story..His parent death.. He got into an orphanage and got bullying some of the guys.. The reason for his bully? Because he is still in shock after the death of his parents, which had happened right in front of his own eyes, and basically, he ignores everyone around him.. And there he meets some girl who is doing to be his loves one..Then, after a few years, he going to be 18 years old with his loves one and planning their future.. Then, his girlfriend got taken away in front of him, and he can't do anything because of he to weak against yakuza group.. Then, his loves one got r*ped and killed by them..His thirst for revenge made him awaken the system.. First of all, there is no superpower in this novel.. Only high-tech.. So, I am quite disappointed, which I thought there going to be some superpower, cultivation or anything like that..The first thing he does is tell the bully on the orphanage.. Well, he got along with that guy after a few years, he lived together on an orphanage.. Then, he also tells his lawyers about his system..So, the story is quite boringgggg after that.. After reading a few more chapters, I no longer continue the novel.. It really not my cup of tea..
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Ty for giving my novel a try. I will try to keep this short.After reading many novels, I have decided to write my own, so some things may feel nostalgic. However, despite my inexperience and the similarities this novel may have with others, I will try to keep things fresh and original.The protagonist is at the apex when it comes to Alchemy, also known as Pill Concocting. But even with his experience, he is not perfect and failed to create his perfect pill, which has cost him his life.The next time he awakes, he finds himself in the body of a silkpants in some backwater place in the Lower Realm.And this is where the story begins.
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Not bad overall. Looking forward to reading more chapters.