Heyo folks, your dear author Roselia Black is here to rock the world again and writing a bestseller.
If you're a fan of Dystopia, action, superpowers,BL, medieval fantasy, contemporary romance, please please please pretty please give my novel a look, even if you don't. read it anyway.
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This novel sucks, the characters are bland the world development and skills are non-sense and the author is freaking creating other accounts so that his novel’s rating is high.
This is a review from the beginning to chapter 26. This novel is a great novel to read if your looking for a overpowered MC, it also includes in depths of emotional intelligence. it gives the novel a great Vibe of 'what would you feel if you where there'. So far author has no grammer errors which makes this a must read novel. I don't really see the comedy but I could be blind. the one thing I like about this novel is that it goes into details a bit into other things instead of the MC all the time. Overall I would give this book a 5/5 Star.SpoilerI find it interesting that he hasn't thought about saving his points for future upgrades.For the author: I think you have potential to make this novel better, I like this novel because of a similar novel that had a person upgrade his stuff. I think you can work more on your MC upgrading himself I don't see how much times he upgraded himself. It's a great read thanks for writing this.
Ok I can honestly say that this novel really isn't a rip off of "Digging to survive i can see hints". Because honestly this novel is way better in all ways compared to "Digging to survive i can see hints". I have read "Digging to survive i can see hints" up to chapter 50 while I have read this novel up to chapter 20 so far I can see many similarly between them both but I can confidently say that "Digging to survive i can see hints" is like a complete knock off version of this novel in my opinion compared to this novel. I don't know if its just me but between the two stories I feel that there is more human interaction in this novel compared to "Digging to survive i can see hints" also there stakes are higher in this novel comparatively being that we actually learn there are groups of people competing for resources while we get to know about these groups unlike how in "Digging to survive i can see hints" it just says there are groups and we don't actually get any information about any group. There's also this leader board thing that we learn about in chapter 19 I think which I feel helps to have a clear goal for the moment in th book because in "Digging to survive i can see hints" I feel there isn't real comprehensive goal besides surviving.
A Sword Spirit?Yeah...not new but this book has taken it to another level....I enjoyed the story (still am)The author is amazing...I don't think this book needs convincing others to read it.
Recommend: Reading. Not really sure about stability of updates, so I just put it at three. Writing quality, story development, and world background seem decent so fours across the board. Character design is three because there are characters I like, even if it's characters I like because I like to hate them, and also characters that I should like or hate but I just... kind of feel bleh about. Unfortunately, the MC is one of those characters that I feel kind of... meh... about at times when I'm pretty sure I'm supposed to just like the MC as a general rule of thumb. It's possible though, that this is just not my type of MC and others will like him. I do have a positive opinion of the story overall though, and I like most of it; even some aspects of the things I don't quite like overall, such as the MC... I don't hate him outright. This is why I would recommend giving this story a read. I don't think you'll come away from reading this with a feeling of having wasted your time. It's above average quality, in my opinion.
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sounds good enough for me waiting with all my expectations
It's an interesting concept and I would like to see a novel like this, but the way it's written is terrible. I hate the loose plot progression and the way the characters interact with the MC. In short, this is something you only read if you're not looking at anything other than the MC getting women to sleep with him and showing off while not leaving his house unless it's to save someone. It's honestly hurting my intelligence even though I'm only 19 chapters in.
Just some examples of what makes my brain hurt reading this.
The MC starts dating his neighbor, who he rarely talked to on the day he got the system. She literally has no reason for liking him, other than his looks. She even acknowledged that he didn't go out much at all other than to go to work and rarely interacted with others.
He also sleeps with the reporter he literally just meets just because he's handsome despite just getting a girlfriend 2 days ago.
He also used magic like it's normal in front of people, and even decided to advertise it without thinking of the trouble it's going to cause him. All because he thought more people are going to ask him to leave his house so he can refuse them to get more points for the system's store.
It's just really dumb to me how he isn't keeping a low profile at this stage in the novel, and I understand it's to progress the plot but it's so sloppy in my opinion.
Bro, how does Qidian do this. If you’re going to change the names of the characters atleast make it synonymous with the synopsis. When did the Kelvin in the synopsis become Jon in the actual book? Also, atleast try and be more creative with the westerbized names. There’s like a Jon in every book Qidian has tried to change.