When I looked at the name of mc, I understood... mc has no brain, mc is stupid, mc plays the hero, beta mc acts with his emotions. The system is in the wrong person.
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Ahem ahem.......?What i wanted to say that the most main topic is I can review this again ?I mistakenly gave this story 3.5 But now I can fully rate this story again?
author i only have one thing to say don't Stop don't Stopthe evil mc gets my readers kissthe character get my love but they will die anyway i suppose the world building is one of a kind i have never see such complex but complete and real like feeling it gives it CAN NO WILL BE A MASTERPIECE AS RIif you don't Stop what are you doingwe no atleast i will support it ( i don't know about others though so give everything you have (I hope you see this )
I came often to check your profil because I was a huge fan of Magic with you and I'm in love with this novel too ? that all I loved and I will tell my readers to come and have a try with your novel I'm sure they will love it as mostly like dungeon advertures, system, action, magic... I wish you all the best and I will try to follow your fantastic novel even though my time to read is tight ?❤❤❤
This story follows the Main Character(MC) who prepared for a zombie apocalypse by building a shelter, and how he leads survivors. The entire story focuses entirely on the MC, and how he would act.
The MC is prepared and appears to adapt well and is strong, but is not without flaws. Side characters are not all yes-men, and tend to have their own preferences. This story was refreshing to read, and at time of posting was updated 2 chapters a day.
Intersting synopsis...
5 stars for Support I'm The 10th, thank me !!!
I'll be reading this novel in about 60 seconds.
Damn u, 140 characters.....
Ok from the starts this story is set to make anyone that thinks logical go insane. He was nr. 1 in the world with the best guild why accept the fight in the first place , but with that contract this crosses illogical thinking into retardation if the things were reverse yes that would have made some sens but even then why risk it , even as nr.2 the amount of money and influence he would have to risk it on a duel kinda idiotic .
At the beginning of the story, I was really skeptical I'm to going to lie. There were grammar mistakes, the characters seemed underdeveloped and I barely understood anything that happened due to the lack of deeper expansion of the world setting. But after spending some time working with Ultra to fix the mistakes, the plot started to make a lot more sense to me and although it may not have shone in the text yet, Jack started to undergo character changes that made him a much more understandable character.
Overall, the story has a slow start. The beginning doesn't have the same hook as other stories may give but after a few chapters, you start to get more into the story and the characters that annoyed you at the beginning start to grow on you, It's a great read really, just don't give up at the beginning because you're going to regret it later
I read this up to chapter 23.
I think the author did a good job in writing this book. The quality is excellent, and the writing is neat, and everything flowed nicely. I can see that the author is a fan of sci-fi and did some homework as well.
Although it's still too early to tell about the story development, so far, the story is moving on nicely. It was not too rushed or too slow. I quite enjoy reading this novel.
Anyway, good luck, author.
I really like how Kirito behave in this one. His attitude towards his women, especially to Sinon are good. Harem for the win!
oh wait.. wrong novel you say? nah, it can't be.