This story is very well written, and overall and in interesting read that I think you should give a try. And if you've already read the description this won't be a spoiler. But I would have to say the best way to describe the story or at least how he evolves is like a chimera ant. And if you've watched Hunter x Hunter which you really should you know what that is. But overall it's a really good read and I do recommend. o((*^▽^*))o
an other one fell to the greed of absurd privilege. 50e to unlock all privilege (for only one month, while still needed to unlock each chapter.it's sad since I enjoy the story.
Finally a short chapter in the future.Ye Xiu and Mucheng are finally getting married!!??I really want more chapters,i want to know more about their life stories and achievements?
There is a requirement hidden and interlaced in the fabric of time around webnovel that says every author has a duty to write a review about their story lest a hand comes through your screen, rings your neck, and kills you...I didn't want to die so I decided to write a review...Feel free to ask me questions here about the novel, give me constructive criticism, call me names (nice ones), and also remember to add those comments to each chapter so I know how much you hate the story so I can make it worse...I mean... make it better... and tell me how much you love it...Thanks...
I couldn't even finish ten chapters. The hero, instead of trying to show off his talent in alchemy, makes himself look stupid. And everyone starts making fun of him. 99% of the chapters I read contain mockery and contempt for the hero. I bet the whole novel is like this.
The novel is very good, the concept is nice, the plot development is mostly logical and interesting, even the character development is relatively good (something xianxia are notorious for being bad at), the main draw of the story, world building and kingdom building are some of the best I have seen among web novels. Alas, it has a glaring major flaw, one I tried many times to overlook but failed to, because it destroys the main draw of the novel. To put it simply, the author loves retconning, he retconned the story so many times that I've completely lost trust in his ability as a writer. These retcons are primarily aimed against the protagonist, basically he gives the MC a power-up, then realizes that he became too strong for the current arc, so he retcons the story by either nerfing MC directly by making his cultivation techniques suddenly not work (he did this for soul refining, the MC is in a situation of endless resources but he's not advancing by an inch; and for body refining by first giving him a strong cultivation technique then just ignoring it) or indirectly by making his peers stronger than previously stated.
It's a pretty decent read, other than a few grammatical errors here and there, it's quite enjoyable. Hope to see more chapters in the future
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Whoa!!I really find this book interesting..I hope for more!!More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.
It's a good novel I want to read more so plz continue, I am interested nine the novel so don't drop it and it is fun reading it. Hope you will continue with this novel.
Frankly, a disappointment, a naive personality, trivial dialogues, a scared hero, a trivial system that gives experience for free as if it were a donor. How bad is this?
boring, start race chosen is so generic, said he was going to choose fighter but went mage. to much info dump right at the start. here i was hoping for a decent vrmmorpg novel to read but ended with with this garbage.