great ? ? beginning ..... hope remains same... unlike other choice novel... Plz ? don't make it boring.... thank you ?... will update the ratings... depending upon how ? the story goes.
This is the exact same novel which has already been translated before! It's not even a good novel! Nothing new, don't know why it is in the trail read section! Please don't pick this garbage!
I love this book. The story has a very high potential. The characters are very loving. Harem route is progressing well. Ideal fantasy world. I wish more chapters were updated weekly.
I sorted have an higher expectations but got squash soon after...nice Grammer thou....with no mistakes after reviewing it again don't know if author got sloppy after the chapter I read.all in allit's all good on specific places except some places
I like the story. The way it is being portrayed is well done. Its World Background and Character Design is quite unique from it's counterparts in Webnovel. The Story Development is progressing good, I can see where it is going. Writing Quality is not the best, but it's fine. Just a few improvements in some parts would be enough or just improve in the latter chapters would be alright.
i honestly don't understand why this novel is the second in trending ranking. it start good but the development and the interaction is worsening as the story goes.
The first chapter was all I could read. It seems a machine translation. A bad quality one with minimal editing. I gave average rating to all other than writing quality as without reading the story can't judge.
I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences.
The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up!
Hope you get better!
I like the storyline and how the practioner gradually proceeds towards achieving his growth in realms. LONG TAO is a great character.
I would recommend all to read this
Thank you for everyone who reads and supports Picturesque. I didn't expect that a lot of you will appreciate my craft. I'm working on additional chapters daily to manage the story well.
I Really love it, continue writing this novel please ♥, but there is a lot of things that I don't really understand but it's ok------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------