i don't do reviews often, but figured i should because somehow this novel has high ratings. i'll start off with the writing quality, it's poor. the english isn't good, the writing feels robotic and detached, it's not immersive at all and is sometimes confusing due to the poor english. idk about the stability of updates so i just put that at 5 stars. story development is weird, doesn't make sense, there's tons of plot holes and it feels like the author completely forgets everything he wrote about 3 chapters ago, it's like the men in black wiped his memory every 3 chapters. as for character design, it's really awkward, pretty stupid especially the "protagonists" who aren't really protagonists, they're just normal stupid villains called the protagonist while the mc is a slave to the system and an idiot, other characters also feel detached and not real. as for the world background, i haven't read enough to really have a good opinion about it, but so far it's nothing special, and is not that great.
This novel is above average with new troupe that's it... and detailed review I will make after 30-40 chapter and I waiting for female main character and I hope there is really a main character or else he paranoid
if anyone can find which novel the first 75 chapters belong to.. I would really be grateful. thanks.........................................
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fake op mc waste of my time. wasn't exactly bad either hence the 3 stars so try it and see if its something you'll like. I just have zero patience for fake op mcs
to be honest, this novel is kind of mix from other novel. the MC is quite strong, but she couldn't manifest her ability due to her mentality and other reason.
if the world max lv is 99. the she must the apex predator there. with her body or race much stronger then the original inhabitants of the world, she should be able to fight. (look the Overlord, Ainz is max leveled and he is unstoppable in that world)
Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions.
The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
zero creativity, rinse and repeat, generic tropes, lot of plot-holes and plot-armour, useless MC, brainless and foolish MC, .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
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good
A good novel, writing quality is excellent. But I would say a bit more world background would make the novel a very good choice. Over all, a new novel that would catch your attention very fast.