The plotline for this novel is rather incomprehensible, and the main character's actions aren't very relatable. Then again, it is different, and I suppose uniqueness is important in the cultivation genre.
Honestly disappointed that readers will not choose this and would choose a nationalism novel
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the avg Chinese eng speaker is rising i think gross man
Five Star support
Five Star support
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Five Star support
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I very much enjoyed the novel. The hero was on a high level of personality, intelligent, a ruthless killer. Until chapter 21, things began to deteriorate because of the crazy girl who included him in his team. The dialogues between them are trivial, crazy and stupid. Also, his sexual relationship with her is a disgusting thing. His first team was good, obedient and without petty dialogues. Thank you for your effort. What ruined the novel is that crazy girl and the trivial dialogue with her, on the whole, she deserves 5 stars. The chapters were long and good.
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We are at just the begining, but I love it! I dont usually write reviews, but this novel deserves it. It has good quality, no grammar problems, interesting charachters and development and most importantly it isnt boring!
I have just one negativum, the Author has not enough self- confidence, even the parts that he deems as boring are fantastic, so keep up the good work and thank you for the experience!!!
Love this Book, pls keep writing, but somthing is wrong with the chapters starting at 130, old ones are uploaded agian and again. I NEED more chapters
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So I read it, here's my two cents about this book, at first I like how the story was portrayed by first person but it suddenly change to third person that actually mad me lose interest it changes abruptly. I do not relate to the main character so I was not hook, I think, just my suggestion you should consider changing point to point perspective with considerations. The writing quality it good and it was mysterious but some may not find it catching when the mystery is not that something where when you read it you'll be full of questions, In terms of plot and world building, I think it's good to make it more interesting. Remember, that's just my opinion don't take it to the heart. It's better than average just need some work, keep up the good work