I am already getting the vibe of mystery and adventure in the very first chapter. I love how you clearly show your characters as well.Delivery more of your masterpiece without holding back.
20 chapters have been published. There are still few chapters to comment on. I can only say what I like. Thanks to the author!
The story is interesting and has potential... I'm very intrigued by how the Hunter System would be as the story moves forward... However, the concept of the system itself needs a bit of background or introduction for readers who are not familiar and only starting to read system novels like me... Also, your book has so much dialogue, at least 75% I think. It kind of looks like a movie script or a manga / comic... It's not bad but when I try writing like that, I get a harsh rejection from my editor... "remember that you're writing a book not a script"... those are Webnovel's words from writing guidelines.
This is a great story. I can't stop my self giving it a five star review Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed.Plus, the writing style is quite simple and goes in a good flow. Great book and will surely enjoy it
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
Lilith is an angel created by Light as a friend besides Dark.
The sound of the news soundtrack that I usually hear is heard.
Some voice whispering my head. "I will stop it Darek, if u won't be Creazy anymore, i promise, just pretend to be an normal ... person ...."
Shancai:"jimin you stay-"
Is there romance?
"Thats the thing he just Collapsed out of nowhere, Miss Martian is already on her way to the base with him" Kid said trying to ease the situation.
Her mafia identity..