As someone who does not write reviews I will just say I very much like this keep up the good work I am sure the onle reason ppl are not reading this is bc have how many chapters there are so again keep up the good work
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The first chapter is quite cringe, the second chapter is just about the best thing ever made, sadly the mc doesn’t end up being quite as hyper and extreme as the second chapter would have me believe but its still pretty much perfect overall.
Contains r*pe, what else one could say i think some author doesn't understand some things are uncomfortable to read especially things like this and don't even try to justify this saying *it's the truth of world*.
Even if it is most people read novels and fanfics to pass the stress and boredom after a hectic day while these things makes it traumatizing and futher disturb the readers.
If someone says i am being overdramatic then there's something wrong with your mindset.
I'm obviously into videogames on a whole and this book got me fascinated.The whole background was well described and the story flow is intriguing to be honest..You've got good work, keep it up??
So far the story development has been great... Hope more chapters are released fast so that we don't end up losing interest since it feels like we are still far away from the main plotline
The problem arises in the show's treatment of each of the cases: while they all start out well, giving us a clear understanding of the problems that cause the mysterious diseases,
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REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?ADVICENone, the author was a better writer compared to me..... kudos!
I must admit that these an original story well conceived but I'm sorry to say that you make a story based on a single goal saving her mother from a so-called disease of which nothing is known and whether humanity can actually cure her or not these due to the lack of relevant information at first instead of focusing on the essentials. What saddens me the most these why you want to make a one-piece style story that never ends because no matter the one-piece type story all The endings will look sloppy because of all the plotholes its would have been better to make his mother a goal for 1 arc and then change for another but not the the objective is to find an object that is supposed to fulfill the wishes, these the dumbest thing to do especially in order to save someone sick after all you want to tell me that he will find it after only some month of research while the others one searches for a long time how his mother will live until then.To finish this story could have been serious if the objective had not been so childish I know that you supposedly want to show us the determination of the MC to save his mother but the "quest for the one piece" turn it into a stupid joke from my point of view
At this point, I’m only going to be reading novels that don’t have the entire plot in the title.Thats all i wanted to say really, was bored and felt like i should put that out there. Also i get Exp i think, so i have that going for me. Also wondering if Authors read their own novel after its done? Or they just find that tedious, I know i would. Like they spent ALOT of time writing and re-editing it, they know the plot, they know whats going to happen. No reason to read it again….I was going somewhere with this….oh well. Have a great day/night everyone, dont get covid or hurry up and get better already. Also some of you need to go outside and touch some grass.