First of all i am not fan of bl or lgbt but...WHEN I READ THIS NOVEL..I CHANGE MY MIND. SERIOUSLY THE STORYLINE AND THE PLOT REALLYY INTERESTING AND AWESOME. I HOPE THE READER DON'T IGNORE THIS NOVEL BECAUSE OF LGBT,BL AS WE CAN'T JUDGE A BOOK BY IT'S COVER HAHAHAH. I HOPE THE AUTHOR CONTINUE TO POST NEW CHAP(ﾉﾟ0ﾟ)ﾉ~ლ(^o^ლ)✧\\(>o<)ﾉ✧＼(°o°)／
This is very amazing novel but it doesn't get selected for translating. Don't know what will happen to it. Till now no unpicked novel get started again after its time is over. I think this novel should get reslected again. [img=update]
Stability and World Background 3* since it's new. Cultivation novel about a boy who comes across a fortuitous encounter which enables him to produce Qi and Spiritual Essence which in turn, turns his world upside down. Like what most people have been saying, it's a generic cultivation story plot. However, by all means is it not uninteresting but casual enjoyable. I found myself reading all 60 chapters and waiting until it gets picked up. It's a familiar novel that you've read countless of times and still not sick of it. The author writes good enough to get you hooked. The question now remains is, for how long? Verdict: Read when you can.
Interesting, good background and has lots of potential, but the author is still in his infancy when it comes to writing.
Info dump everywhere, description of important events are ignored, characters are the most fake I have ever seen. Forced bullying, forced situations, no credibility at all.
The Mc is dumb, ignorant of his own powers and is a suckrr for girls. Even the good old cliches are badly done here.
The grammar and English of this, is almost umbereable. Needs some seeeerious editing to become readable.
But again, is has potential, but the author seems to never have read a good written novel before. Maybe in the hands of a different writer, this can be a good gem.
At last, good luck author. Hope you become a hellaof writer and comes back to redo this one.
Good luck.
So far so good, I just stopped at chapter 21 since I'm out of passes but it's a fun read. I like the Mcs powers but I think they need a more developed description, honestly, that's it, some things are rushed or glossed over and they don't need a long description but some easing into instead. like how I didn't even notice it was a 2-year time skip and am confused how she suddenly joined the military like what was the thought process behind that. but these might already be discussed later I'm just waiting to horde some more passes
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''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued
''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued
''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued
''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued
''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued
''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''
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I was a little hesitant to read this initially, because I thought it would just be another cliche, typical story of a weakling stumbling upon a demon. It wasn't.