Really great short light read. Fast paced. The characters are very likeable. I just need more of them. Them FLS team needs some side stories!!!
is this droped if it is i would like to know coz i realy love this novel?..................................................................................
i love this story soooo much and have been resisting the need to binge the intaier 70chs in one sitting i love the MC he is smart knows cliches and makes use of them (no dense/beta mc), his porsonality is very deep and has layers yet very simpal and we learn of him with the female lead how is one of my fav waifus even thow ther is no image of here
oooh boy, this is poorly written with Ok translation. If you want something brainless to pass time this will work. If you are looking for a proper city builder skip this story. There is little reason or logic to much of what occurs. All the characters including MC are very flat and 2D. Every simple action the MC makes gets praised as genius ....
The story is pretty good.However,i'd advise you to change the cover.The story's aura doesn't match too well with the cover.Yes the cover's nice but i'm looking at the aura it exibits. find something much more suitable for your story . What i've experienced is that the title and cover of a book attract more or less traffic of readers.Your title is really good.So just change the cover.I assure you,when you see the cover,you'll feel connected to it and you will find the one that exibits the same aura as your story.Apart from this your story is very nice.
Overall the novel i'll give it a 7/10 from its writing alone I can tell that be author have some experience with handling its character, some my issued are the grammar need some improve but further reading I guess Author fix some of them.Too bad it's only 50chps it would be nice if were full blown series with at least 100+ chps. my only tips I can give is that expand more with r world building & characters I'm sure some of your new titles will surely be better.
This book is just amazing. There are like no words that can describe how good it is. I just want to say I love you author for writing such a beautiful book and I support this book. I totally recommend this book for everyone. I'm looking forward for the next chapter of this book.?
The beginning of the story is intriguing. The gamer, in a state of affect, made the most elementary mistake ... launched the left application. And there, as you know, there are many viruses. But the player did not understand what he was doing ... and then a new secret would probably be revealed. This is the original beginning! Oh, the main character had to immediately put his phone into the pan and close the lid, then the signal would stop coming into the phone, and he could avoid contact with another world. The first and second chapters were very inspiring. The third reveals the world of players well. By the way, if your romance has been banned, you can turn to staffs and piggybacked so that the romance is banned.An unusual world, the story begins atypically, this is an original story, very interesting and impressive.I like it!
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I want to like this novel because it has similar premise to legendary mechanic. But wow the writing is just terrible. Pacing is horrible, first plot point hasn't been completed at chapter 40 yet a bunch of other nonsense has happened, and the girl has gone from weak villager to Reaping the lives of elites from the city. Story is just so disjointed its not fun to read
I dont know how qidian does calculation, but some ****ty novels are ranked higher than this gem , i totally cannot accept this, other ****ty novel are getting released 14-20 chapter every week , and this godly gem novel is falling behind, This novel is one of the best , based on character design, world background out of all the novels I have read
The grammar is good with almost no mistakes.The sentence flow is not the best. This makes the story a chore to read at points.I found myself skipping over some of the cultivation explanations. Nothing innovative that makes these cultivation sections worth reading.The story is well thought out. The book is generic at the beginning, but becomes an interesting read later on.I recommend the book for xianxia readers looking for a new novel.This also a decent book for those who want to get into xianxia and don’t want to start reading a 1000 chapter book.This story has nothing unique or mold-breaking that would make non-xianxia readers interested.With all that said, I personally look forward to new chapters.