Not bad it is well written and there is room for development with some creativity you should be able to get up and in no time
It seems interesting. Just build up on the scenes before moving to the next one. This makes the book more full of suspense and scene that can make the plot more detailed.
Pls update It’s to good i want more god good novel epiC
This novel is good ...
Some cons:
1.arrogant character
2.no love but MC is playboy but no harem
3. MC is too overpowered and arrogant
5. Some cliche stuffs
Pros:
1. I like it
2. I like it
3. I like it
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A lovely piece if work!
It's very heavy on imagery and description, which I am a big fan of. It really helps encapsulate each scene and the emotions of the characters really well.
The prologue was really strong, and the other chapters are also really enjoyable to read to. There is a solid amount of wit and humour, and the whole story progresses in a very natural way. I love the characters, their dynamics, and overall, I'm really enjoying this story!
Amazing work!
The book is okay. Pretty middle of the road. There are good points, like the world building however the flow feels wonky and a bit jumpy and the grammar whilst decent compared to some of the novels on here, alongside the flow make it pretty hard to read. But I do believe there is a good amount of potential, the author definitely needs some practice as it can be a little boring and the characters a bit odd. Like he's in India, why exactly is he called Nix? His friend Nagendra should never be that calm in an accident, no matter who you are there is always an initial panic and worry.
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FIrst of all, I love your book cover, especially when you mentioned that you made it! Second, your introductory for the book is superb! Although I am not a fan of informal writing (or dialogues), it was enough to captivate and engage me in the story~
Will definitely read this through~ Kudos for the author!!! [img=recommend]
Interesting plot and interesting characters. Readers can easily get connected with the story and characters. Over all its a good work and waiting for more. Good luck author
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