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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

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yo please keep writing this book I'm loving it yo the story is amazing and I love the characters so please just keep up the good work mate to everyone reading the ratings you gotta read this book

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So much time spaming paid of....
I think someone happy....
Now i need to remember what this story about...
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This is a very good novel, the story is really addictive and the plot is  well described. It's easy to imagine the scenes. I highly recommend it

What thing that amazed me in this story is the mysterious resurrection of the Deputy. I'm a fan of power system and this story is more than power system

10/10 would recommend. The grammar here has a few minor errors that are clearly simple oversights, but other than that, the command of the English language here is more than what you'd expect from an amateur Author. You're really good.

Update more chapter AUTHOR!! I really like this novel so please dont drop this thing :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

generally a good book, im eager to read more and will see how far this book will carry my interest, currently its very good

لقد اتخذت قرارًا بقراءة هذا الكتاب. لقد أحببته حقا. المحتوى ملموس. نادرا ما أقرأ الروايات. يعجبني لأنه لا يجعلني أشعر بالملل أثناء القراءة:)

There is a lot of potential for this story, but the quality of writing detracts so much from the overall novel it becomes almost unreadable.

- Switching between past and present tense, grammar and punctuation errors abound.

- The sentence structure itself in many paragraphs is broken or reversed.

This has the working of a great novel, but it needs some love and care - an editor could make this novel so much better.

Even if the author put it into word and grammarly it could make a huge difference.