Tinha muito potencial porém ficou irritante e desgastante ler, esses conflitos interno continuam até o o final do livro, algo tão simples fica arrastando a história, qual a dificuldade de entender sua própria natureza, se você procura um romance com verdadeiros vilões não recomendo, só vai se decepcionar no final, fora isso a história é bom, pra quem gosta de um protagonista ingênuo, facilmente manipulado e que não entende o simples fato de não existir bem e mal, apenas benefícios
I mainly like the novel but the author's level of racism towards other countries is extreme. There are times when racism is so extreme that it is gross to even read ... gross.
well the idea is great, but china is sucking themselves alittle bit to hard of imo. Its just annoying to read every chapter about how great the federation is and how the mc is a law abiding citizen. yikes
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This is exactly what a reader dreams of, a story that they can live and breathe in. Feel the tension and turmoil, the bliss and the love. The story progresses nicely and the characters are beautifully written. LOVE IT!
Oh a cultivation novel with a system? Is there gonna ever be a week that we don’t get one of these? Probably not because Chinese authors wanna be wuxia cultivators, they may even try to get hit by truck-kun just to try and go there Smh.
Not entirely new, but the novel has a fresh approach on xianxia story.
Pacing is good. System is not overpowered. Enemy has a real feeling of danger which are commonly missing.
Read till ch. 35. So Far, So Good.
Great novel ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
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The story is pretty amazing. It was pretty weird at first but then you start to understand everything. I would really recommend to read this story.
Name: Fellow Doaist Chen, Can You Get Further Away From Me 陈道友，请你离我远一点行不行
Author: Daddy Almighty 爸爸无敌 Lv.5
Chapters: 211chapters(480k words)
Status: Ongoing
This story only at 19 ch has a lot packed into it already. The MC is not a over pissed off dummy and his past relationships are alittle mysterious. I just wish there were more frequent updates.