It is a very beautiful prehistoric novel. The world background is well designed. It has mixed a little reality and a little fantasy. There is no problem with the personality of the main character. The plot is not repetitive or cliché. It is very subjective. in short, this is a great novel .....
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A Really nice story. The author did justice to the characters. If you love this book I recommend you also read “The Silver Bullet” by SAINt ZEMA.
This is a really good story with a really good mc because the mc is not to op like she is can still be overwhelmed, jealous, and make mistakes which makes her character development much better. I really like this!!
This story is definitely worth a read, the characters are well thought out and have their own depth to them, the world continues to grow with each chapter, and the split between the mortal world and magical world is an interesting one! The story starts off a little slow and at first Emery is a little gullible but he’s a kid and it’s believable! If you finish up all the free chapters I’m sure you’ll want to read more, I look forward to the continuous expansion of the magic cultivation and the world you’ve built
Overall it looks to be a WoW clone with a some different take on things such as no Horde vs Alliance but same classes and a majority of the vanilla races. It doesn't really detract from the story the game elements are solid, it is overall a decent read.I am not really engaged with the moments when he is out of game it mainly just revolves around his cat and minor life things.The character has been really fleshed out despite 30 chapters, I would like to see some character depth as at the moment he doesn't have any real defining traits.Honestly not sure what the author is building this story it reads a bit like a slice of life as the power ramping of some VR novels isn't really here that much. I guess that is probably the direction the story is going since the premise of his character is halos/buffs so he is relatively passive.
Although this is an incomplete novel as of yet, I quite like it. It's unique to its genre and just overall is a good stoty. Also, love the consistant uploads author-san! I hope this novel becomes a sucess. Appreciate your work <3
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It is not the best but still good enough.
Hope it get picked for translation.
BTW does anyone know the raws?
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waiting for update hehe
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