Anyone know the name of this novel in chinese or mtl(machine translated) site to read?......................................................................................................
This story is growong slowly and I've already become addicted lol but where are the chapters??? I want more!!! Keep writing and keep growing as a writer. You have an amazing talent.
Some will love it some will hate it. Me? hmmmmm i wont tell you. And you should not watching rewievs and decide for your self if you are gonna read it or not. :D
What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out.
When I picked this up on a whim, from the synopsis I thought this would be some game mechanic OP retardedness which would make me rage quit before I finished the first 5 chapters. I was totally wrong. First off the world building is left open ended since the MC is a student about to graduate. He doesn't have world experience to fall back on. But to the positive he realizes he doesn't and can look at situations without preconceptions? MC also does not have the stench of overwhelming cockiness which 97% of the MC's in your regular CN possess. Mysteries abound, hints and possibilities are foreshadowed in almost all the chapters. I enjoy a writer who can hint at and sketch in the scenery and characters layer by layer. All in all, a great start at 22 chapters. I hope it continues in this vein for many more.
Read up to pay for view chapters and dont want to download the app.So the review is up to chapter 44 and the score is based on a novel that wants to earn money. (Its a harsher score then some first time novel writers or fanfics.)Writing 4: No glaring mistakes found here. No big grammar mistakes and the sentences flow. It is written as a very light read. Stability 3: i checked and it isn't very stable. It is released around every 2 to 4 days but you wil be left uncertain exactly how many days there is between each chapter.Story 2: Very old man reincarnates and becomes OP. That is basicly the story. Where i got at chapter 44 you learn a little more and a big plot or arc seems to be coming but for the first 44 chapters there is none.Character 2: The mc is either mentally handicapped or the author has failed in his mission to write about someone who is 80+. The mc sounds more like a 15 to 20 years old who got reincarnated but if he was then all his previous life skill would make no sense. As such i believe the author wrote him as old. The parents are very accepting of everything around the mc to a fault. Furthermore the 3 females introduced are like most harem novels, just plain dumb when it involves the mc.Background 4: Actually enjoy the background and the abilities sounds nice.I do recommend to give it a try if you like a read where it doesnt go in depth. It's good for your casual i dont want to think and just read moments.
This is great, a bit late on update but still great... Love the story line???_ makes me wonder how the webtoon adaptation is going to be. I really want to support u. Hope this words of encouragement is enough, keep up the good work. Just know u have a fan in me XOXO, Sire_gram.?
Not ganna lie. This story is good. You can stop reading this review here. I'm just filling the requirement to post this review. Lol. Ahhahahahahahahaha
Awesome story ........................................................................................................................................................................................................... 140 characters
Yoo I can feel the vibe, School-life, with Demon-chan, this is definitely interesting! MC knows he doesn't want to fall in love. But the way he's handling the problem feels like he KNOWS he can make others fall for him! I'M ROOTING FOR U TOO! LET'S GOO AUTHOR!
It's a very slow pace story. The characters and MC IQ is walnut-sized, letting people attack them leave easily. Also, the most annoying character Liao Bufan exposes all the information that is supposed to be secret and acts scared and stupid all the time. He lakes common sense making stupid people seem intelligent compared to him.
story is going on a good basis with good story line....but recently the problem with the chapters not getting updated sometimes and initially there were two chapters per day but now one and sometimes nil. poor show I have taken privelege but I think it's just wastage of time if this goes on ...So plz resolve this issue and answer us back in cmmnt section