Intriguing and engaging, it'd be nice to see where the story goes. Nice development and magnificent suspense and transition within chapters.
A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work, though there is still room for improvement
The story is great and has a fresh way of introducing the world and characters compared to other cliche fantasy novels i've read. Can't wait to see what the author does with the story
He will be a great example by creating his harem Ddd
What a intense story, keep it up. Keep writing
The story development is good and character well designed. The book had a unique taste.I like the introductory part of the story. Good work, keep up updating.
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(I haven't read it) I'm curious about the relationship between the characters
It's a dark story with a strong opening before things get worse. The MC only appears in the second chapter (technically the third because of how the story is structured) and before you could pity him, all hell's let loose. And you guessed it, it only gets worse from there.Not the style though, written in the third person present, it puts you right into the thick of it. I can't say "enjoyable" because it shows the darkest horrors but it's well-written. Keep up the good work!
"IYEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH SEEEE YOUUUUU MYYYY SUCKKKKEEEER SONNNNNNN!" My father answered with his Madisgood accent.
All of class was silenced for a moment.