Take little time and make it a beautiful creation . Really Good,Take it till end ........................................................
Fairly good. The writing and story quality??.Read up until the available chapters and looking forward to the next
Systems and Sex - if that's what you're looking for, you found it :DOn a serious note, the writing is clear and easy to follow, with a nice flow. System elements are a little heavy for my personal tastes, but appropriate for a litrpg. It feels like the MC is always down for some void sex (several sexualized encounters as of chapter 20) so I would consider that to be a primary facet/draw for readers. It takes a while for other characters to be introduced, but the story starts to open up more around ch18. The world is well-fleshed out and action scenes are easy to envision.
best. the world building is excellent. mc is op
The story has been good so far. The world building is great! I love how Javer character has a different kind of speaking (?) because he was from different region! it's a nice touch!
You really tried tho I really love your work and I hope you keep it up Always updates the chapters try more features to improve
awesome, wonderful, cool story. one of the best story I have ever read
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perfection 10/10........................
It is a very interesting story, lily has great potential and I can't wait to see her character grow with the king
Appreciated? Author deserve a respect for actually writing this book?
the best sports novel translation on the app for sure