Worth taking the time to read .
Definitely a good story so far and hopefully it gets picked. There are a variety of rough parts. The translation is hard to follow at a few points and can't decide on things like if people cultivate Qi or Aura. The MC is overall an interesting character but his lack of reaction to murdering lots of people sticks out as odd. The little girl is a little too obedient for her age but is otherwise another solid character. So far I like it and definitely recommend it as overall it is a very solid read. The world seems interesting and I am curious where the story will go. Only 25 chapter out right now though so YMMV.
Not counting the complete lack of originality, It began with some hopeful details. But it quickly derailed in a cheesy melodrama with nonsense classic and overused webnovel plot devices.
tltr: Reading this is a waste of time.
The concept has a lot of potential. The writing style is way too chaotic.
There is a lot of open threads that will possibly resolved in a satisfying way but the problem is there's too many of these threads at the same time. There's just too much setup why foreshadow multiple events so early on it's too much to digest.
I guess this is just my preference and others may not be bothered by the above... probably worth picking up again later but for now it's a pause/ drop
This book has a lot of potential. The plot is very intriguing and characters are well written and real. I've only read up to 4 chaps which is not enough to give a detailed and decent review, but this book has been amazing till now and i hope it will be in the future too. And it seems that the author is new as well. I hope you will not drop this.
The MC is crazy stupid. the book talks about revival chances and How supposedly he would never respawn after he ran out. Then he talks about how the price to buy one is high and then he runs out and uses all his money to buy powerups. Theres Lso a time where he gets ambushed by a gang and after he goes to hire a house maid and after is told the the maid he hired is a cyborg and after confronting the person deciedes to let her stay despite the fact the she could and is someone who is out to get him.
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Definitely a great read, had some unique aspects, Right now it updates a lil slowly so it may just sit in your library but also worth a good binge when you need a quick one
Writing Quality: 5☆
I don't count bad english or typos in these kind of reviews as they don't change the story, can always be edited and judging the authors english over small things like that is just unreasonable.
Story Development: 5☆
Even before any real big story development is made you can sometimes tell that it is good, and this is the case here too.
If in these 12 chapters there would have been a big change, it would have already been bad in stories like this, so it is already good that, while you can already look in the future a little in the first chapter, there is no big change yet.
The 'introduction chapter' tells you that in the next chapter from now there will definitely be some development in the next chapter.
In other words, the pace of the story is well done.
Character Design: 5☆
Not much to say.
In chapter 3 or 4 (I don't quite remember) we will be introduced to Ayane and we can already tell that she has a very special character and a very elaborate character design.
Following that we get a glimpse of the reason for mc's attitude, which already hint on great character design for him.
Later on in chapter 11 if I remember correctly, we get introduced to a student called Dracula as her surname. We also get a little explaination about the name and have a moment with her.
While it was only speculation, I have made a comment at the end of the chapter that I have put my thoughts about her character in, and the fact that I was able to think of so many things already shows that she most likely also has a pretty special character on top of the bit that we already know.
Somewhere we get a flashback to the prophecy and can see that even almost irrelevant background characters, such as the sage, don't lack personality, which is something I have only seen in 1 other novel for a just one character to be frank.
If rating this 6☆ would be an option, I would choose it. Respect +1, sir author!
Updating Stability: 4☆
My sense of time us very bad, but (correct me if I'm wrong) I am pretty sure that, even tho we got daily chapter (I think at least...), the time in which they get uploaded isn't uniform.
World Backround: 5☆
Thank the god of fate, WE FINALLY GOT SOMETHING NEW AND AT LEAST A LITTLE ORIGINAL!!!
the only problem i have with this is that i need more chapters, so far everyhing is lookin good.
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