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Putting 5 start because it my book and it's good you should read it. You will find that they things the group of people do does get finished and others do and other parts seem like they are useless but they ain't and you should read it more
this novel has no point to its existence. the beginning plot is rushed, and just outta nowhere he now has the search bar, next after the rape incident, vegetative state girlfriend and his grief and still present love for her the guy decides to take a drunk women home and have a wild night. its like he doesn't remember the rape crime he was set up for in a very similar scenario. the funny part is that its only ch.12 and tbe author already destroyed his own novels synopsis. really disappointing mc. i have no respect for the man anymore.
Hey Romeru, first of all I would like to say that I really enjoyed the first 69 chapters. The beginning of the story was a little bit rough, but the story gets better and better. I think the book has a lot potential. The characters are unique and I really like the development of the protagonists friend circle. I don't see the hate you are talking about in chapter 69. The book has a rating of 4.9 stars and the comments are positive. So don't be disencouraged from 1 or 2 people who are writing dumb comments.
good enough, keep up your good work author-san...........??????????????????????????????????????????
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Just a pretty entertaining read, and I was hooked by it for a while with its excellent grammar, like a professional writer for a long time. Worth reading, which is good for some who likes action and thrill.
Overall great novel, mixing systems with eastern fantasy. Writing quality could use some work such as tense mistakes and the like, but it's not too big of a deal. A proofreader or browser extension like Grammarly can do the trick with ease. Keep it up, author, looking forward to see where this story will go.
I'm currently reading it at mtlnovel. Mysterious noble beast. No faceslap. No arrogant young master. Good comedy. = PerfectionHe can copy skills and paste it on his pets depending if it is compatible. Not invincible but still OP
Thank god. I hoped this would be picked from the start, and judging by the support its getting, it looks like it will make it through. Its just such a breath of fresh air from the normal trash.
Review time, 7 chapters. (For those who need it)I am honestly disappointed. The sypnosis seem interesting and well, it kinda disappointed me.Like the sypnosis said, the mc needs to create wonders. But it's just blueprints from the system. It automatically create auspicious effects. The only people who believe in it are his own sect disciples so there is no actual story behind everything.All what the mc need is materials and the system will create effects for the wonder he creates. Then because the disciples believe in him, the mc gains the abilities in the said wonder. Very disappointing.World background is the same as any cultivation novel.Translation Quality: 5* (as always)SoU: 5* (as always)Story Development: 2*Character Design: 2*World Background: 2*Overall score: 3.2Personal score: 1.5
If you want a story that makes sense leave. one moment it says naruto have kage level chakra then the Next it says he has jonin level. also even though naruto has sage body he still needs the summons locations to become a sage. Mc also Unlocks his sharingan by just pushing chakra In his eyes( not activate he unlocks it) and its never explained how. this is just a bit i got from the first 5 chapters so read this if you arnt going to pay attention to it.