nice story but hard to follow the flow, jumps from character to character, no explenation on how the story went from point A to point B and suddenly going to point F with no explenation.
hoped for better flow After going Premium but It remain the same. I regret spending coins for this quality
its quite a random story, with such an unexpected plot, the characters are quite interesting with all of then having problems and difficulties, overall the story is quite nice, it lives up too its Dark Realism story.
I only read the first 30 or so chapters. Nothing about the MC is likeable. He is weak AF, he is dumb AF. Author seems to be kinda forcing a character development, forcing a romance from the start?Dunno, I guess this just isn't my cup of tea.
this novel had an alright premise but it is completely ruined by the incompetency of the author by making the story seem like it was written by a 5 year old
I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!
i was just starting taking interest and it is now "Premium "......... I think author could have built his foundation of 50 or something chapters so others can explore more about mc and his life.....sigh~well w/ever, story has good plot but power levels could have been more simpler ....( like, esper, abilities , espgen, soul) .......i mean it 'could' have been .......anyways it's up to Author .....So as far as i have read, it's readable and quite gun as mc is not stupid or sometimes he is stupid and sometimes he is smart....Lots can give it a try[ Warning : Author has used heavy Friendship force here... And there will be no betray like cliché ... ]
From what I read before the review, most of it is Gucci.The writing quality is practically tip-top, aside from some slight typos. The paragraphs are well-aired. The flow is good.It is updated daily, so that is a five-star right there.As for the development and design part, it looks all good from where I stand :)Keep this up author, you got this :)
Great otome novel. The story progress is fast and just about right. Story is not boring and each chapter is fun. MC is stupid and not likable bcz he is weird and not antihero, sometimes also not likable bcz he acts really cowardly and pathetic.
Love the pure evil villainous vibe from the mc. Hope the author continues to keep this vibe while not reducing the quality of the story.. Till now, it has been an amazing novel.
Really good. Strongly recommend.Clear world background, power levels and so on. I just hope it would be updated more frequently. The MC and the Harem is fine until now. This is a fast growing, strong cheat power MC. But is fine, since it’s more into ‘embracing the beauties’.
I always love ur novel, i can't wait a new member, i hope everything will be ok for them, and for u keep healthy and save, i wait ur update
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